XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Self-Portrait]

Wow

Wow this was really good stuff here some really nice character here, the backround is massivly detailed I could see you doing even more light up specs there, and your character work is pretty amazing if you ask me, I will give this a high score here because you have put alot of energy into this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backround is massivly detailed I could see you doing even more light up specs there

~X~

[The Bet Pt.2]

Awsome entry

I love the "EFFECTS" and details in this one like the clouds and lighting, I see no need for any changes on this piece its pretty solid work if you ask me, You make some very entertaining stuff and hope you make many more with these wild and crazy characters, I find myself enjoying each piece a bit more each day with all the different characters and all there wild adventures, very good stories and good use of well executed jokes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I see no need for any changes on this piece its pretty solid work if you ask me

~X~

[Robo-janitors]

Fresh

So this one here has some very fresh "ART" allthough some added backround on this or atleast a prop or two maybe even just a design patern back there would be cool, A good piece of art here, it has some nice elements about this, allthough I could see it improving but I will touch on that later, but you do have some nice style here on this piece. and I look forward to see what else comes from your creativity, so keep that element of qaulity up. Now while I will be ending this review soon, this piece does bring some interesting visuals to the table and thats all a positive thing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added backround on this or atleast a prop or two maybe even just a design patern back there would be cool

~X~

GoodBadArtist responds:

Thank you for feedback! And it's my old piece and I wanted to make it simple and just try my hand on this kind of characters. Glad you liked it and I'll take you advice and improve on my future art!

[Cycling]

Wow nice

Now this was something very "UNIQUE" first of all the backround art is pretty intense and the animation you added to it was just as good and very smooth if I do say so myself, I think you could make a nice full animation from this but anyways some really nice work from this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could make a nice full animation from this

~X~

[The Bet Pt.1]

Good laughter and joy in these

Oh no a "MAGITION" lol These bring lots of laughter and joy to the fans and viewers such as me, and its people like me that really enjoy the time and energy you push into these and the stories characters and humor all bring some fun moments of this fine web-comic, so keep making great stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
just make more of these funny ones like this

~X~

[Yokaink]

Black and white at its best

So here was something done in some black and white the black and white at its best and you have showcased that here today with all the detail and "NICE-SHADES" even but some really nifty design you have presented here and "A-NICE-BLACK-AND-WHITE" finish here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would throw a black and white or colored frame on this.

~X~

SaniKink responds:

the frame would actually be a really neat idea!

[Chicken Cinema]

Wow this was funny

I have to say this one was pretty "FUNNY" And I do think you have some potential to make some comic strip based on this art piece maybe the troubles of the chickens life and so on, just an idea to think about but regardless you have some good artwork here.

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I do think you have some potential to make some comic strip based on this art piece maybe the troubles of the chickens life and so on, just an idea to think about

~X~

[Sferic Curves]

A nifty patern

A nifty design and patern if I do say so myself with this "NIFTY-VISUAL-POINT" here, you have some good ideas and you have pushed a nice design out of it your lines and detail make this form a "NIFTY-LITTLE-DESIGN" here and I was really impressed with your design.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would mix some other colors in there.

~X~

OneWhoListens responds:

Thanks for reviewing & for the suggestions!

[Flight Simulator]

Very entertaining

The "FLIGHT-SIMULATER" was a nice idea with this one, wish this one was a tad bit longer with more to the ending, This comic series, keeps me laughing and chuckling with every new entry so nice job here very welldone work, from the little funny and amusing characters to the jokes and humor or how you end each comic story or keep one interested so nice job on this one I have really come to enjoy it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish this one was a tad bit longer with more to the ending

~X~

[Inktober #26 Dalmation]

Decent

Nice detail on the dalmation here. I think when you work with line art your ink is very good and always detailed. I wish you had more color in these those, but I understand not having it as the dalmations are usually only black and white. I think a background of color would have given this a splash and good effects. X marks the spot made me giggle as I am ~X~ and I do mark spots, but not on dogs hehe. I do like this as a good ink piece so keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color in a background with a background

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hey I didn't think of that additional meaning. :D It really is in the eye of the observer too huh! Glad you got that giggle, and thanks!