XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Onrday]

Artistic

The darkness of the figure makes up for the missing line work; the black creates the "OUTLINING" for the different aspects of its body, working with the blank white "BACKDROP". Said backdrop also aids in the presentation of a silhouette rather than a solid figure, providing further ambiguity to the figure and their "CHARACTERISTICS". Facial features, the slight brightness from the red undertones, and the whiteness of eyes creates a rather unsettling vagueness, as well as a tone of suffering.

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I think some type of design or backdrop in the backround would be nice but also still have a while element about it.

~X~

[Gremblo]

Beautiful

She has a beautiful "SMILE" and that perfect pose too you have a good drawing skill here and it shows off well and I was glad to have reviewed this piece as its some top notch work, I might ad that maybe a sparkle on her hoop earings might be pretty good idea, anyways keep up the awsome art work.

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I might ad that maybe a sparkle on her hoop earings might be pretty good idea.

~X~

ndasfw responds:

Thanks a bunch, glad you like it! And I appreciate the crit!

Great suggestion- little lighting details like that are something I'm trying to improve on actually! But you gotta admit, the light hitting Gremblo's buttcrack is exquisite. ;)

[Regal]

Nice creature

Lots of "SHADING" that highlights the toned, muscular detailing of the "CREATURES-BODY", The level of shading favors the sketchy look of it, while adding depth to it, Definitely no need for color Its unearthly appearance holds an all-knowing aura, what with the presence of wings, and the facing of an "UPWARDS-DIRECTION", The vertical layout was clever in that it allowed the artist to draw an extended length of the creature, Dissipation towards the end only adds to its mysteriousness, and the overall quality.

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I think you should have added some type of glow to the eyes maybe with the same yellow shading as the backround.

~X~

[The Bundys]

Married with children

Although they all pertain to the quality of cartoon "CHARACTERS", Complete with an exaggeration of their "FACIEL-FEATURES" and physical attributes, they each hold some sort of individuality in their exact details, This leads to the stimulation of the viewer’s mind, and brews questions concerning what each of them represents. The repeatedness of an uninterested male with an attractive, intrigued, albeit unintelligent looking female raises "FURTHER-QUESTIONS", Very thought-provoking.

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Very nice work I think you should have added the dog though.

~X~

[Drunk Driving]

Entertaining

Wow the "GRAPHICS" and lighting effects are really good on this one some very nice effects, you have some good talent on this comic and there for no need for any changes, Very nice indeed, out of all the ones I have reviewed these always give me some good adventure from this series even the humor is always top notch and a good quality of entertaining value so nice work indeed, and hope to see much more from you, anyways keep making great comics.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you have some good talent on this comic and there for no need for any changes

~X~

[Spam]

ohmy

Spam can never be good, this was a nice submission here on "SPAM" lots of adventure and tons of humor, so nice work indeed on this piece here, thats what you bring to the table especially in this one here lots of great entertainment and really love how this one ended so nice effort and love the energy you put into this web comic.

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A crazy entry here great art and outcome no changes needed.

~X~

[Tan]

So very entertaining

Ouch once again and someone got the end of the stick here lol, the text bubbles seemed a bit hard to read nothing major but maybe it could be bigger somehow, So much entertainment and fun elements of joy the stories start off slow but end with a bang, These are very entertaining and you for sure bring on a new "ELEMENT-OF-SUPRISE" the endings always have a "BIG-BANG" ending and thats another element that I love about your writing and jokes you put into these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the text bubbles seemed a bit hard to read nothing major but maybe it could be bigger somehow

~X~

[Darwin Potential]

Nice Ocean scene

Excellent job done in creating the look of the sun reflecting on them through the surface of the "WATER" Attentiveness to the "BACKROUND-DETAILS" also adds to the image, the visible pieces of a shipwreck in the back and the treasure chest between them makes way for a story that viewers can follow easily, "THE-SOFT-EDGES" of the background in contrast with the thin albeit sharp line work of the girl and the sea creature, keep them as the center of focus. Her warm brown color scheme amongst the cooler shades of the sea also further encourages the tone of invasion, and her belonging to land.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small details like some backround sea life maybe some scared fish running off, and the treasure and jewls could have more sparkle and shine to them.

~X~

[Zero Suit Samus]

Nice pose

Firm, bold line work produces a "CLEAR", exact presentation of every curve and dip of her body. A "HORIZONTAL-LAYOUT" of the drawing aids in the completeness of her body, allowing the artist to draw it all out beautifully, Her pose, in consideration with the presence of a gun in her hand, makes for a "FEMME-FATALE" character The strong blue shade of her suit works well with blond hair and a white, blank background Though the facial features aren’t exactly realistic, the anatomy is correct.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure you should change anything but a shine on the gun and maybe some simple props in the backround.

~X~

[Handy hands]

An amazing Idea

So great idea here with the "LIGHT-BULB" you really made this one work well love the lighting effect here and Im sure the hands have meaning as they have light now, as for any changes or ideas I thaught this was actually pretty good with a nice element so there for needs no changes, anyways keep up the amazing work.

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as for any changes or ideas I thaught this was actually pretty good with a nice element so there for needs no changes

~X~