XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Masterpeach]

Mmm peach

Ok well I do like a peach now and then, something sweet and you've got a good idea of the look of one going on here. You are using your ink style for this and I like that, I like the lines of textures you have created as well. I like the overall feeling of it that is gives off too. I would love to see you have more peaches next time or attach it to perhaps a tree or something? It would be nice to add it to a bit more of a background setting as fruit alone can be a bit dule. Overall tho it is a pretty piece and interesting fruit concept.

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as mentioned above, needs a background and more of a setting

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Cyberdevil responds:

Well it's just one because: master peach, you know. ;) Glad you liked the texture though! I was pretty happy with that too. Was experimenting with a few different hues instead of just brighter/darker of the same color, and it actually worked OK with this one. Thanks for the comment again! Though regarding those backgrounds... rain check.

[Tisane]

Beautiful texture

So you have some nice "TEXTURE" in this especially the backround I like the subtle colors too that made this kind of fun here you really did make this subtle but thats what I like about, as for any advice on this piece I think just making more of this style would be a plus on things, its an amazing piece of art.

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as for any advice on this piece I think just making more of this style would be a plus on things

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[Derpy Grinch]

Very fresh

So this was pretty good I like the "FRESH" look here fresh colors and even the backround had some nice fresh design on this, I have no major tips on this one as it was a very nice piece with a fresh look about it, You have some nice work and I was pleased to find this and review it.

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I have no major tips on this one as it was a very nice piece with a fresh look about it

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[Conan The Snowman]

Cute

Ok this one was very original and cute because I've never really seen a snowman with glasses before. I mean why did you name him Conan too? I like the name but it doesn't work with the glasses to me. He should have a more geek name like Kevin. I am not sure but overall the piece was nice and you captured that cartoon snowman look. I like the snow and effects around him and the blue eyes were a nice touch. You almost gave him a sort of human face and expression. Overall I liked this one.

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nothing to change

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Cyberdevil responds:

I guess you haven't read Detective Conan huh. :) Definitely recommended if you're into manga/detective fiction/any comics in general. Glad you liked this one, background and all!

[Akali KDA]

Love the neon

I think the "ANIMATION" was really nice more neon would be a nice touch too, Well its something different and I like what you have here, it seems to have something of a theme a little anyways, there was some nifty things I have not seen done before, so glad you put in some effort to make things different. So I do look forward to new stuff you have. Glad I found this creative and nice piece of artwork here well rounded So this was a great outcome if you ask me and it was a pleasent piece.

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more neon would be a nice touch too

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[Desert Horse close-up]

Beautiful

So this was beautifull you have some nice "TALENT" on art here and this is a prime example of it, Now I do think some extra backround would be nice like a tree maybe a small lake in the desert and it could be blured to show the motion of thr horse running, anyways nice work here.

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I do think some extra backround would be nice like a tree maybe a small lake in the desert and it could be blured to show the motion of thr horse running

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[Merry Early]

A cute comic

So this was a rather "CUTE" comic, you should think about making these longer maybe a few more frames, and maybe even making a long running web comic of some sort, this was a good joke well executed and the artwork was notbad either I enjoyed this piece here.

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you should think about making these longer maybe a few more frames, and maybe even making a long running web comic of some sort

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BigEyedBen responds:

A fair analysis.

For one thing, I enjoy drawing like I did when I was 9 years old. I'd like to believe I could make more detailed artwork, but my cartoon character was invented when I was a child.

I usually choose the amount of frames based off the story I want to tell with them. I've occasionally, in the past, made some strips without dialogue to kind of emphasize the point that there's an awkward pause between scenes. If you wish to elaborate on their length I am more than willing to hear your input.

What sort of web comic would you prefer to see? A running series based on random events, or something along a plotline that takes place along a series of story-based events? I've had plans for both.

[Dragonair + Rapidash = Rapidair]

Beautiful

A really beautiful piece you have some amazing "TEXTURE" in this and the combo of the two mixes Dragonair + Rapidash = Rapidair was a really nice idea, You should make a series of art with more combos like this, but anyways nice work here and some beautiful artwork.

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You should make a series of art with more combos like this

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[Bug Family]

Color

I really love your use of "COLOR" love the vibrant colors here on this one and all the bugs is cool, I could see you making some sort of web comic with the great use of color you do, anyways nice design here and it was artistic with great color make more soon.

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I could see you making some sort of web comic with the great use of color you do

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