XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #31]

Dark

Ok so this one was dark and I love the red of all of it. You seem to have a hidden monster inside the red using lines and tricks and I think that was a really good idea. The shadows are nice and the black border around the entire image really works. I would like to see more of this, but not just the same one but with the same elements. Keep up the good work.

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More of this would be great with different designs

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yes indeed, he's in there somewhere, lurking in the shadows, surveying the world outside, radiating an untamed and intimate cruelness... glad you liked this one! :) Hope to do something similar later on too. I liked the idea. And how most of it turned out.

[New Yanburg Invitation]

Nice

You did amazing with the black and white here, So I like black and white drawings, but honestly with much more color or even some added color it wouldnt hurt to have, it would really entice the art piece or drawing a lot so thats something to think about adding this was nice work though. love the design here.

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but honestly with much more color or even some added color it wouldnt hurt to have

~X~

[The Bet Pt.3]

Nice energy in this one

lol I had fun with this one poor carl and dave they both got the end of the stick here on this one, for sure make more emtries like this it was awsome, I love the detail the characters the humor and most of all the story depth, that really makes this whole series worth the while so nice job indeed. you make some good comics and cant wait for even more, of what you make next this is an ongoing comic of greatness.

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for sure make more emtries like this it was awsome

~X~

[Self-Portrait]

Wow

Wow this was really good stuff here some really nice character here, the backround is massivly detailed I could see you doing even more light up specs there, and your character work is pretty amazing if you ask me, I will give this a high score here because you have put alot of energy into this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backround is massivly detailed I could see you doing even more light up specs there

~X~

[The Bet Pt.2]

Awsome entry

I love the "EFFECTS" and details in this one like the clouds and lighting, I see no need for any changes on this piece its pretty solid work if you ask me, You make some very entertaining stuff and hope you make many more with these wild and crazy characters, I find myself enjoying each piece a bit more each day with all the different characters and all there wild adventures, very good stories and good use of well executed jokes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I see no need for any changes on this piece its pretty solid work if you ask me

~X~

[Robo-janitors]

Fresh

So this one here has some very fresh "ART" allthough some added backround on this or atleast a prop or two maybe even just a design patern back there would be cool, A good piece of art here, it has some nice elements about this, allthough I could see it improving but I will touch on that later, but you do have some nice style here on this piece. and I look forward to see what else comes from your creativity, so keep that element of qaulity up. Now while I will be ending this review soon, this piece does bring some interesting visuals to the table and thats all a positive thing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added backround on this or atleast a prop or two maybe even just a design patern back there would be cool

~X~

GoodBadArtist responds:

Thank you for feedback! And it's my old piece and I wanted to make it simple and just try my hand on this kind of characters. Glad you liked it and I'll take you advice and improve on my future art!

[Cycling]

Wow nice

Now this was something very "UNIQUE" first of all the backround art is pretty intense and the animation you added to it was just as good and very smooth if I do say so myself, I think you could make a nice full animation from this but anyways some really nice work from this one.

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I think you could make a nice full animation from this

~X~

[The Bet Pt.1]

Good laughter and joy in these

Oh no a "MAGITION" lol These bring lots of laughter and joy to the fans and viewers such as me, and its people like me that really enjoy the time and energy you push into these and the stories characters and humor all bring some fun moments of this fine web-comic, so keep making great stuff here.

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just make more of these funny ones like this

~X~

[Yokaink]

Black and white at its best

So here was something done in some black and white the black and white at its best and you have showcased that here today with all the detail and "NICE-SHADES" even but some really nifty design you have presented here and "A-NICE-BLACK-AND-WHITE" finish here.

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I would throw a black and white or colored frame on this.

~X~

SaniKink responds:

the frame would actually be a really neat idea!

[Chicken Cinema]

Wow this was funny

I have to say this one was pretty "FUNNY" And I do think you have some potential to make some comic strip based on this art piece maybe the troubles of the chickens life and so on, just an idea to think about but regardless you have some good artwork here.

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I do think you have some potential to make some comic strip based on this art piece maybe the troubles of the chickens life and so on, just an idea to think about

~X~