XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #21]

Depth

This one here is okay and has some serious depth going on inside it. I mean, the way the black lines flow with one another is fascinating. I love this style you do because it looks like rain of black making shapes and characters. I do think you use a bit too much black and could use some color on the main characters, but then it may lose that style you've got going on here, so while it may work out to add some color, I would understand if you did not do this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Good job as it is, but maybe add color to his one next time

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

"rain of black making shapes and characters"... I like that. :D Color or no color hmm... it does change the character.

[Where bluebirds fly]

Artistic

I have to say this is some pretty artistic views here the color jumps out at you and the painting style is so nice you can see the strokes of artistic value and you can see such great structure within the characters and theres some great "STORY" behind this as it is in the view point, I really dont see a need for any changes here I think if I have suggested anything thta it would to put some frames on this one, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really dont see a need for any changes here I think if I have suggested anything thta it would to put some frames on this one

~X~

[Kings Laugh]

Very cool Sprites

This was some very cool sprites here you really know how to make some sprites look there best maybe a shine here or there but you create a nice "DETAILED-SPRITE" here and I was really impressed with this one, the "DETAIL-IS-UNCANNY" And I love every bit of this sprite work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Wish these were bigger but it would destort the sprite.

~X~

[Float on]

Wow Nice

So this was really nice I love this "PAINTING" of the skellies just haveing a convo here and there, the backround "STRUCTURE" is really well detailed and you have some nice detail touces all over so nice job indeed, I would love to see you ad some sparkle or glistering shine come off the bottles on the table but it was all good so nice effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love to see you ad some sparkle or glistering shine come off the bottles on the table

~X~

[Ulala Dancin']

Very nice sprite work

Some interesting Sprite work you have here you really have a nact for this and you make the sprite work "SHINE" there is some artistic value in sprite work like this and you have showcased it very well, "I-AM-VERY-IMPRESSED" with what you have created here and hope you keep making sprites.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changes this was a fantastic piece.

~X~

[Arachne 2009]

Wow Nice

This is really "INTENSE" this is some really nice work the "3d" style is just mezmerising would have liked the light at top or other lights to be more glowing and light up lights and such, thats just an idea what you have created here is pretty amazing regardless so nice work indeed on this fine 3d piece here, so nice work indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would have liked the light at top or other lights to be more glowing and light up lights

~X~

[Such Great Heights]

Really Beautifull

Now this was beautifull I love the "BUBBLES" and the "BIRDS" you really have set the tone with this one and made a great "VIEW-POINT" here I think adding a sun light or beam of sun light comming down in front of the character even reflecting off of the bubbles with sparkles could be a nice option here, but anyways its a beautiful art piece you have created here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think adding a sun light or beam of sun light comming down in front of the character even reflecting off of the bubbles with sparkles could be a nice option here

~X~

[Simon]

Simon

So the name or "LOGO" simon was kind of nifty and all the "HIGHLIGHTED" streams that glow was a nice touch even the cracked backround was cool, the logo I believe could have some shine and sparkle from all the light up streams and such just a small idea of improvment, anyways nice work indeed on this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the logo I believe could have some shine and sparkle from all the light up streams and such just a small idea of improvment

~X~

[Hunting A Hydra page 1]

Nice Details

So this was pretty good, I really like the details on this like the "SHINE" on the spear and the design on the character itself and this was sort of like a "COMIC" and was kind of cool a nifrty comic full of color and some really nice view points, I would suggest some frames and or borders on this though something to relate to the comic itself, so nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some frames and or borders on this though something to relate to the comic itself

~X~

[Inktober #2]

Not bad

I see you've not submitted this one for voting, but I think it is pretty neat as it is. I do like your orange color use and the eyes on these characters are very cute and unique. I like the fact you have an orange under them going with your theme here of oranges. I think the white space is a bit unneeded but you can always add more background later to your work. I know you've done vector backgrounds before so it is nice to see when you do those. I think next time add a bit more and it will be a fully completed piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More additions to this and less white space

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah there's quite a few of these I didn't really feel qualify as portal quality. :) But thank you. These are all Inktober doodles after all so I haven't spent a tremendous amount of time on each one, but will keep getting better I hope; make better things even without tremendous amounts of time required! :) Appreciate all these reviews!