XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yokaink]

Black and white at its best

So here was something done in some black and white the black and white at its best and you have showcased that here today with all the detail and "NICE-SHADES" even but some really nifty design you have presented here and "A-NICE-BLACK-AND-WHITE" finish here.

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I would throw a black and white or colored frame on this.

~X~

SaniKink responds:

the frame would actually be a really neat idea!

[Chicken Cinema]

Wow this was funny

I have to say this one was pretty "FUNNY" And I do think you have some potential to make some comic strip based on this art piece maybe the troubles of the chickens life and so on, just an idea to think about but regardless you have some good artwork here.

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I do think you have some potential to make some comic strip based on this art piece maybe the troubles of the chickens life and so on, just an idea to think about

~X~

[Sferic Curves]

A nifty patern

A nifty design and patern if I do say so myself with this "NIFTY-VISUAL-POINT" here, you have some good ideas and you have pushed a nice design out of it your lines and detail make this form a "NIFTY-LITTLE-DESIGN" here and I was really impressed with your design.

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I would mix some other colors in there.

~X~

OneWhoListens responds:

Thanks for reviewing & for the suggestions!

[Flight Simulator]

Very entertaining

The "FLIGHT-SIMULATER" was a nice idea with this one, wish this one was a tad bit longer with more to the ending, This comic series, keeps me laughing and chuckling with every new entry so nice job here very welldone work, from the little funny and amusing characters to the jokes and humor or how you end each comic story or keep one interested so nice job on this one I have really come to enjoy it.

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wish this one was a tad bit longer with more to the ending

~X~

[Inktober #26 Dalmation]

Decent

Nice detail on the dalmation here. I think when you work with line art your ink is very good and always detailed. I wish you had more color in these those, but I understand not having it as the dalmations are usually only black and white. I think a background of color would have given this a splash and good effects. X marks the spot made me giggle as I am ~X~ and I do mark spots, but not on dogs hehe. I do like this as a good ink piece so keep up the great work

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Some color in a background with a background

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hey I didn't think of that additional meaning. :D It really is in the eye of the observer too huh! Glad you got that giggle, and thanks!

[Hide-n-Seek Pt.3]

Very cool web-comic

The backrounds area looked pretty intense, So this web-comic of yours brings on lots of flavors, It has been strong and domminant and brings fourth a nice flavor of characters a nice energy in a story, and its that story that keeps me entertained from start to finish and another reason I look for another new entry every week or so, so keep making these.

~X~

[Birthday Cake]

Notbad

So this was cute and actually a decent little "CAKE" I thaught you could have gone the extra step and ad some backround maybe like a party with celebration its a birthday afterall, but anyways this was cool I like the simple design here hope you had a nice little cake like this one.

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I thaught you could have gone the extra step and ad some backround maybe like a party with celebration its a birthday afterall

~X~

[Boogie]

Interesting

Well this one here is a bit different but not uncommon. I do like this one with its use of a frog or lizard, but something reptile and fun with a nice face to show it has an expression of melencolly. It needs more like a background, I don't find it too interesting without one, but it is interesting. You have shading, lighting, coloring, and textures. You just need a solid background here but good job overall.

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Add up a background to this for more solid look

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Nothing really works without a background huh. :)

[Apple Con PriceList]

Wow this is cool

Ok this one here is something cool and interesting. I never thought I'd see an ad that is also great art. You obviously worked very hard on this one and I am really proud to say you contributed well to this site and the future of the site. The way you advertised each piece with text and detailing was spot on to get your audience looking and interested. The way you've seperated each piece of character or piece to purchase was also good. I think that really let it stand out from the rest of it and let you see what is going to be for each piece. Like you see how each thing you'll purchase looks and you aren't being fooled when it comes to what you're about to get. The way you've included prices beside it was smart but a bit small. I think that font size could have been put up a bit more in terms of trying to get people to see it when they are at a "CON" because these posters really need to stand out when people walk by quickly and if you cannot read the prices because they are too small, then you're going to run into problems. Each item has great detail, but my fave one of these is that "UNICORN" I wish I had one of those, I would love to display that and just make people come up to me wondering wtf is going on. I think overall you've created a great marketing poster to get people interested in the items. Your text font is good and I love the colors on colors so things don't get lost in here, and I think overall you've got a good eye for advertising and marketing to those people are cons. I hope to see more of this soon and hope NG goes to more "CONS" soon as well. You really made me wish I was there and I want to really go to one of these in the future, so please try to put the word in.

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Just fit the size of the text in some parts and areas as it seems to really be small for a poster that you'll want people reading during a convention. Other than that, nothing to change a good job here.

~X~