XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Float on]

Wow Nice

So this was really nice I love this "PAINTING" of the skellies just haveing a convo here and there, the backround "STRUCTURE" is really well detailed and you have some nice detail touces all over so nice job indeed, I would love to see you ad some sparkle or glistering shine come off the bottles on the table but it was all good so nice effort here.

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I would love to see you ad some sparkle or glistering shine come off the bottles on the table

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[Ulala Dancin']

Very nice sprite work

Some interesting Sprite work you have here you really have a nact for this and you make the sprite work "SHINE" there is some artistic value in sprite work like this and you have showcased it very well, "I-AM-VERY-IMPRESSED" with what you have created here and hope you keep making sprites.

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no changes this was a fantastic piece.

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[Arachne 2009]

Wow Nice

This is really "INTENSE" this is some really nice work the "3d" style is just mezmerising would have liked the light at top or other lights to be more glowing and light up lights and such, thats just an idea what you have created here is pretty amazing regardless so nice work indeed on this fine 3d piece here, so nice work indeed.

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would have liked the light at top or other lights to be more glowing and light up lights

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[Such Great Heights]

Really Beautifull

Now this was beautifull I love the "BUBBLES" and the "BIRDS" you really have set the tone with this one and made a great "VIEW-POINT" here I think adding a sun light or beam of sun light comming down in front of the character even reflecting off of the bubbles with sparkles could be a nice option here, but anyways its a beautiful art piece you have created here.

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I think adding a sun light or beam of sun light comming down in front of the character even reflecting off of the bubbles with sparkles could be a nice option here

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[Simon]

Simon

So the name or "LOGO" simon was kind of nifty and all the "HIGHLIGHTED" streams that glow was a nice touch even the cracked backround was cool, the logo I believe could have some shine and sparkle from all the light up streams and such just a small idea of improvment, anyways nice work indeed on this piece.

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the logo I believe could have some shine and sparkle from all the light up streams and such just a small idea of improvment

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[Hunting A Hydra page 1]

Nice Details

So this was pretty good, I really like the details on this like the "SHINE" on the spear and the design on the character itself and this was sort of like a "COMIC" and was kind of cool a nifrty comic full of color and some really nice view points, I would suggest some frames and or borders on this though something to relate to the comic itself, so nice work here

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I would suggest some frames and or borders on this though something to relate to the comic itself

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[Inktober #2]

Not bad

I see you've not submitted this one for voting, but I think it is pretty neat as it is. I do like your orange color use and the eyes on these characters are very cute and unique. I like the fact you have an orange under them going with your theme here of oranges. I think the white space is a bit unneeded but you can always add more background later to your work. I know you've done vector backgrounds before so it is nice to see when you do those. I think next time add a bit more and it will be a fully completed piece.

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More additions to this and less white space

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Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah there's quite a few of these I didn't really feel qualify as portal quality. :) But thank you. These are all Inktober doodles after all so I haven't spent a tremendous amount of time on each one, but will keep getting better I hope; make better things even without tremendous amounts of time required! :) Appreciate all these reviews!

[Who's next?]

Very Nice Character

Wow this was a really nice character you have created here, I am loving the "PURPLES" and loving the overall design of the character, theres lots of great "DETAIL" in this piece and really just appreceate the detail and effort here, I wouldnt mind more blood maybe even some blood on back wall setting and even some structure as the backround, I would also suggest some sparkle on the shiny points like the spikes and whatnot, but regardless this was a cool piece.

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more blood maybe even some blood on back wall setting and even some structure as the backround, I would also suggest some sparkle on the shiny points like the spikes

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[MCD]

Decent

I do love a good logo for companies. I think this was not bad and was done well for what it is. I do think your lighting is off in places, it just seems all over the place with those dots, but I see this making a good logo or something for a banner. I do like the use of color and your vector designs seem to flow well with polished line work.

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Work on the lighting for your designs a bit more but good overall

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Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm yeah, not sure what I was going for with those dots, seems like an unfinished pattern when you start looking at it... good eye. And glad you liked the logo overall!

[Honor Roll Breakfast Album]

Nice

So this was some sort of "LOGO" or "BANNER" I am enjoying all the red flames and I have to say the "WORDING-OR-FONTS" are nice but I think you could have gone with something more vibrant and some font that jumps out at you more and I would put more flames on the outter edges of this as well as those areas seemed to be lacking more flames and whatnot, other then that this was a pretty nice view point of the art entry.

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the wording or fonts are nice but I think you could have gone with something more vibrant and some font that jumps out at you more and I would put more flames on the outter edges of this as well as those areas seemed to be lacking

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