XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ascent into megalomania]

Nice black and white here

Ridding the drawing of any color builds on "THE-TONE-OF_DESPAIR" or angst. The hard line work also maintains this tone by keeping a certain roughness around the edges. Shading works with the edginess of the drawing, despite being rather light. The heavy darkness around his eyes goes well with his hair, and leaves his personality "OPEN-FOR-INTERPETATION". Still, the assumptions will most likely point in the "DIRECTION" of angst, thus keeping the entirety of the mood in correlation with the tone being presented by the artist.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shading and in the backround would be pretty cool.

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[Benny - The Dragon]

Nice

So this was nice here, the "LOPPING" was a nice scene here, I think you should ad some dripping blood might make for some nice results with the action scene you have here, this was a really nice art piece almost seems like you could make a comic series out of this one, anyways great work on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should ad some dripping blood might make for some nice results with the action scene you have here

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[Vegetables vs. Candy]

Cool

Thick line work creates sturdy "DEFINITION" for the usually inanimate foods, providing an easier look of "STANDING-UPRIGHT" in their personification, Said personification has a cutesy look, keeping them appearing animated and cartoony, Although the dark background isn’t exactly complementary to the vibrant color scheme of both the vegetables and the sweets, it does well in adding some sort of tenseness between the opposing sides.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My advice here or tip for this piece would be make more of these verses types as they are pretty unique pieces.

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[Sweet Dreams]

Spongebob

The mix of both realism and cartoons amplifies the message behind this "IMAGE" Spongebob would look terrifying, had he been a real-life creature On an artistic level, the "ANIMATED" clothing is placed nicely on the realistic sponge in that it does not look awkward, but rather smooth in "TRANSITION" Shading and added details on the cartoon clothing also maintain the realisticness being achieved, preventing any sharp, or uncomplimentary contrasts between the two.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some backround props to give off a world or back scene.

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[Toast]

Entertaining and decent

Haha this is what I mean about "WILD" it was a wild one with the flaming hot fire haha, no changes needed here on this one it was well executed in every way, Wild times with these enterttaining characters that are always upto crazy moments and ofcourse always giving me some laughs from the enerttaining value your characters go through so nice job there, this was great from start to finish and love the humor especially the ending on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changes needed here on this one it was well executed in every way

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[Powser]

A great combo

I like the "COMBO" of characters here or the "MESH" and blend that was a nifty idea, the backround was notbad either I am enjoying the detail in this some of those details like the gems and earings and shiny points could have some added sparkle thats a suggestion only, anyways nice art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some of those details like the gems and earings and shiny points could have some added sparkle thats a suggestion only

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thecurlybunny responds:

Thank you! At the time, I was just fooling around with Procreate and wasn’t sure about brushes much. Anyhow, I will work on the sparkles on the jewelry, next time ^v^. Thank you for the suggestion.

[Fatty Link]

Nifty

A humorous twist on the famous "LINK"! Thick line work brings definition, and outlines the character’s pudginess as well as the disproportionate anatomy. The latter "ASPECTS-OF-THE-DRAWING" strongly contrasts Link’s digital "LOOK", and rather slim figure, so it all goes into the message of striking differences between the two. The facial expression seems to exhibit that fact, which makes the drawing all the more comical and interesting.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love to see a sparkle on the end of sword and maybe even some backround design maybe a pateren maybe just some props.

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[Oysters]

Nice ending scene

That "ENDING" scene topped it off on this one, this one seemed a tad bit short but was still ok, You have shown some nice detail and energy in this one and those wacky characters never get old, infact its those wacky and wild characters that really make this whole series worth the while so nice job indeed. you make some good comics and cant wait for even more.

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this one seemed a tad bit short but was still ok

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[Ghost Widow]

Sharp looking

The use of black and white helps deliver the ghostly look perfectly, Soft edges also build on her ghostliness, for they portray an image of transparency, Besides ghostliness, the attire/what can be seen of her body also ties into the look of unearthliness, The heavy outlining of darkness around her eyes, plus the lack of pupils, is especially sinister, Lovely piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I dont think it needs anything but maybe some small detail in the backround even without it its pretty nice work.

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[Raw deal]

Very nice

Wow I have to say that this piece here you have is pretty amazing just the "LOOK" on his eyes as he stairs off into something, and his thinking process very deep and maybe sad, you have expressed his face well, I think a room setting with a light would have been good for the backround, but overall this was cool.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think a room setting with a light would have been good for the backround

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