XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fatty Link]

Nifty

A humorous twist on the famous "LINK"! Thick line work brings definition, and outlines the character’s pudginess as well as the disproportionate anatomy. The latter "ASPECTS-OF-THE-DRAWING" strongly contrasts Link’s digital "LOOK", and rather slim figure, so it all goes into the message of striking differences between the two. The facial expression seems to exhibit that fact, which makes the drawing all the more comical and interesting.

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I would love to see a sparkle on the end of sword and maybe even some backround design maybe a pateren maybe just some props.

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[Oysters]

Nice ending scene

That "ENDING" scene topped it off on this one, this one seemed a tad bit short but was still ok, You have shown some nice detail and energy in this one and those wacky characters never get old, infact its those wacky and wild characters that really make this whole series worth the while so nice job indeed. you make some good comics and cant wait for even more.

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this one seemed a tad bit short but was still ok

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[Ghost Widow]

Sharp looking

The use of black and white helps deliver the ghostly look perfectly, Soft edges also build on her ghostliness, for they portray an image of transparency, Besides ghostliness, the attire/what can be seen of her body also ties into the look of unearthliness, The heavy outlining of darkness around her eyes, plus the lack of pupils, is especially sinister, Lovely piece.

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I dont think it needs anything but maybe some small detail in the backround even without it its pretty nice work.

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[Raw deal]

Very nice

Wow I have to say that this piece here you have is pretty amazing just the "LOOK" on his eyes as he stairs off into something, and his thinking process very deep and maybe sad, you have expressed his face well, I think a room setting with a light would have been good for the backround, but overall this was cool.

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I think a room setting with a light would have been good for the backround

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[Black Cat]

Love this

A wonderfully accurate depiction of the "MARVEL" artstyle, maintaining a certain amount of realisticness while still granting the characters their uniquely "ANIMATED-LOOK". The platinum blond shade of her hair, and the fur lining her catsuit collar, has an agreeable pop against the black of everything else. The added sheen, and overlapping locks makes for "SOFT-TEXTURE", and well kept lusciousness. This builds on the sensual tone, as does her stretched out post. The vertical layout of the drawing helps stretch her out as much as possible, presenting her curvy, womanly figure.

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I would suggest more slick shine but you have already made something here thats doesnt really need much more changes.

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[Onrday]

Artistic

The darkness of the figure makes up for the missing line work; the black creates the "OUTLINING" for the different aspects of its body, working with the blank white "BACKDROP". Said backdrop also aids in the presentation of a silhouette rather than a solid figure, providing further ambiguity to the figure and their "CHARACTERISTICS". Facial features, the slight brightness from the red undertones, and the whiteness of eyes creates a rather unsettling vagueness, as well as a tone of suffering.

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I think some type of design or backdrop in the backround would be nice but also still have a while element about it.

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[Gremblo]

Beautiful

She has a beautiful "SMILE" and that perfect pose too you have a good drawing skill here and it shows off well and I was glad to have reviewed this piece as its some top notch work, I might ad that maybe a sparkle on her hoop earings might be pretty good idea, anyways keep up the awsome art work.

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I might ad that maybe a sparkle on her hoop earings might be pretty good idea.

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ndasfw responds:

Thanks a bunch, glad you like it! And I appreciate the crit!

Great suggestion- little lighting details like that are something I'm trying to improve on actually! But you gotta admit, the light hitting Gremblo's buttcrack is exquisite. ;)

[Regal]

Nice creature

Lots of "SHADING" that highlights the toned, muscular detailing of the "CREATURES-BODY", The level of shading favors the sketchy look of it, while adding depth to it, Definitely no need for color Its unearthly appearance holds an all-knowing aura, what with the presence of wings, and the facing of an "UPWARDS-DIRECTION", The vertical layout was clever in that it allowed the artist to draw an extended length of the creature, Dissipation towards the end only adds to its mysteriousness, and the overall quality.

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I think you should have added some type of glow to the eyes maybe with the same yellow shading as the backround.

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[The Bundys]

Married with children

Although they all pertain to the quality of cartoon "CHARACTERS", Complete with an exaggeration of their "FACIEL-FEATURES" and physical attributes, they each hold some sort of individuality in their exact details, This leads to the stimulation of the viewer’s mind, and brews questions concerning what each of them represents. The repeatedness of an uninterested male with an attractive, intrigued, albeit unintelligent looking female raises "FURTHER-QUESTIONS", Very thought-provoking.

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Very nice work I think you should have added the dog though.

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[Drunk Driving]

Entertaining

Wow the "GRAPHICS" and lighting effects are really good on this one some very nice effects, you have some good talent on this comic and there for no need for any changes, Very nice indeed, out of all the ones I have reviewed these always give me some good adventure from this series even the humor is always top notch and a good quality of entertaining value so nice work indeed, and hope to see much more from you, anyways keep making great comics.

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you have some good talent on this comic and there for no need for any changes

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