XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[L4D - Out of Ammo]

Very nice

A vertical layout allows the artist to depict the "COMPLETE-BODY" of Zoey, as well as the entire figure of Ellis, This is essential in "SHOWCASING" their individual personalities through their poses. The anatomy and face present a realistic style, pertaining to that of the game’s, The darkness of the background, in addition to the ominous glowing of surrounding eyes mimics the thriller genre of Left 4 Dead. Very accurate fanart.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure anything really needs changing but maybe a sparkle on that green glowing stuff, maybe more blood splatter on clothing or ground even to give off that realistic feel that they have been in some battles and such.

~X~

[Paul is dead]

The beatles

Flat colors and firm line work creates a "DIGITAL-LOOK" for the piece of art, That on top of the anatomy and facial features, also produces a "CARTOON-STYLE", Considering that and the comical interactions between the two there, this seems to be a satirical jab at the conspiracy theory of Paul McCartney’s "DEATH", A rather funny piece I do think some added texture could be added to the backround but other then that this was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think some added texture could be added to the backround

~X~

[starry eyed]

Nice Vintage piece

Anatomical and "FACIEL-FEATURES" are depicted proportionately, "OUTLINING-A-REALISTIC-LOOK" of the couple. Heavy shading replaces a need for color, while presenting texture to things such as hair and clothing, Detailing of the man’s face is beautifully done despite being somewhat hidden due to the position, A vertical layout of the drawing allows for their full pose to be shown, Emphasizing the romantic tone black and white color scheme also builds on the "VINTAGE" look.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think some added color maybe some frames in color or maybe even some stars a faint color.

~X~

[The Roman God of Robots]

three eyed bird

Exceptionally thick line work gives a "DEFINITE-OUTLINE" of the character’s figure. Exaggerated features of the face give a cartoony presentation and emphasizes the friendliness of its expression, The warm brown of the lower body goes well with the pure white of the hair. "WHITE-HAIR" also compliments the rosy cheeks and "RED-LIPS", adding a radiance to her face and head, The light shades of green and gold do good with her color scheme, as does the white borders.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some more depth in the border maybe some design patteren over the white frame.

~X~

[Ascent into megalomania]

Nice black and white here

Ridding the drawing of any color builds on "THE-TONE-OF_DESPAIR" or angst. The hard line work also maintains this tone by keeping a certain roughness around the edges. Shading works with the edginess of the drawing, despite being rather light. The heavy darkness around his eyes goes well with his hair, and leaves his personality "OPEN-FOR-INTERPETATION". Still, the assumptions will most likely point in the "DIRECTION" of angst, thus keeping the entirety of the mood in correlation with the tone being presented by the artist.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shading and in the backround would be pretty cool.

~X~

[Benny - The Dragon]

Nice

So this was nice here, the "LOPPING" was a nice scene here, I think you should ad some dripping blood might make for some nice results with the action scene you have here, this was a really nice art piece almost seems like you could make a comic series out of this one, anyways great work on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should ad some dripping blood might make for some nice results with the action scene you have here

~X~

[Vegetables vs. Candy]

Cool

Thick line work creates sturdy "DEFINITION" for the usually inanimate foods, providing an easier look of "STANDING-UPRIGHT" in their personification, Said personification has a cutesy look, keeping them appearing animated and cartoony, Although the dark background isn’t exactly complementary to the vibrant color scheme of both the vegetables and the sweets, it does well in adding some sort of tenseness between the opposing sides.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My advice here or tip for this piece would be make more of these verses types as they are pretty unique pieces.

~X~

[Sweet Dreams]

Spongebob

The mix of both realism and cartoons amplifies the message behind this "IMAGE" Spongebob would look terrifying, had he been a real-life creature On an artistic level, the "ANIMATED" clothing is placed nicely on the realistic sponge in that it does not look awkward, but rather smooth in "TRANSITION" Shading and added details on the cartoon clothing also maintain the realisticness being achieved, preventing any sharp, or uncomplimentary contrasts between the two.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some backround props to give off a world or back scene.

~X~

[Toast]

Entertaining and decent

Haha this is what I mean about "WILD" it was a wild one with the flaming hot fire haha, no changes needed here on this one it was well executed in every way, Wild times with these enterttaining characters that are always upto crazy moments and ofcourse always giving me some laughs from the enerttaining value your characters go through so nice job there, this was great from start to finish and love the humor especially the ending on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changes needed here on this one it was well executed in every way

~X~

[Powser]

A great combo

I like the "COMBO" of characters here or the "MESH" and blend that was a nifty idea, the backround was notbad either I am enjoying the detail in this some of those details like the gems and earings and shiny points could have some added sparkle thats a suggestion only, anyways nice art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some of those details like the gems and earings and shiny points could have some added sparkle thats a suggestion only

~X~

thecurlybunny responds:

Thank you! At the time, I was just fooling around with Procreate and wasn’t sure about brushes much. Anyhow, I will work on the sparkles on the jewelry, next time ^v^. Thank you for the suggestion.