XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Epic Dragon]

Nice Dragon

Beautiful execution of a "MYTHICAL-CREATURE" The pencil has done wonders for this art piece the right amount of shading adds what seems to be fur, scales, and definite structure all in one, Those qualities are essential in bringing this "CREATURE-TO-LIFE" through the paper The angle gives a complete view of the creature which also helps in creating a liveliness for it and so that was that a beautiful art piece and I enjoyed reviewing this piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some fancy dragon like borders on this would be a nice touch up.

~X~

[Depths of Ocean]

Some interesting Sprite work

Some nice "GROUP" of sprites here you should think about animating these somewhat, they are pretty good but animated might be a nice element, You make the sprite work shine there is some artistic value in sprite work like this, I love the little details that you ad onto the sprite work as "IT-DOES-SHOWCASE-WELL" here on this submission, so very nice work here and "I-LOOK-FORWARD" to even more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
they are pretty good but animated might be a nice element

~X~

[SmileyMassacre]

Another good full image

Here was another cool one you have here, this one here well, I really like the character you have, kind of like a pacman type standing in front of a wall but looking like he went through the wall like the Kool-Aid man. That was a nice job the character work is fantastic and it really made me laugh. The coloring was great and the background was nice to see something fully completed and not a sketch type with all the additons and props and settings. so nice job indeed on this nice piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe more blood off the pacman

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Interesting similarities. XD I can see them too now... always looked at this one more like just a twisted smiley. Like the title. And yes, the lack of blood is kinda mystifying! Glad you got a laugh out of it though! Old things seem good for such things.

[Female Sprite]

Good effort

love the effort in the sprite work and putting together sprite visuals here on the portal, you bring some nice sprite visuals here its not just your average sprite work but well maintained sprites that shine in glory so for that alone, I give you props for sprite work at its best.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added sparkle would be cool

~X~

[Self within Self]

Nice and Red

Choosing the color red for this "PARTICULAR-DRAWING" was a smart move, for that color tends to hold various negative connotations with it, Considering what is happening and the "EXISTING-THEMES" around the color red one’s perspective is all it takes to create a story from this image, The focus areas of shading on the man’s face make for a taut appearance, which helps create an interpretation of some form of suffering.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really nice self portrait, seems like you could ad some sort of fancy borders on this or nifty frame.

~X~

[SymbolSmiley]

Funny

This was kind of amazing and interesting in the simplistic style, Funny stuff here and nice style of art work here, its these kinds of pieces that really make me laugh and think about how something simple can be so many things. This was a good art piece, these types can be hard to review and the only thing you really need to change here, like some of your other works, is a background. I do like his one, it looks like a clown face or something you can put over a pumpkin. But anyway nice way to make me smile, keep up what you do because its pretty good stuff, And Enjoy reviewing stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
not sure with this one I would normally say backround lol, but sometimes not everything needs a backround :)

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Less is more sometimes huh. :) It does get me thinking of clowns too, for some strange reason! And the backgrounds, yupp, got it. XD Thanks for reviewing all this old stuff too.

[Underpass]

A beautiful piece

And once again some beautiful pixel art and again no need for any changes to this piece, I like the concept of this pixel piece right from the start some nice work on this one indeed, You have some good skills when it comes to some pixel design and the talent shines very well, and makes for a "BEAUTIFULL" piece indeed, so nice work on this one all the way around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And once again some beautiful pixel art and again no need for any changes to this piece

~X~

Kldpxl responds:

Thank you very much for your helpful comments.

[My Queen]

Really nice

So this was some really nice work here, the shine is nice but maybe if it was more of a sparkle might look better, Always nice to see the progress behind a piece, though in this case not that case lol, but you have established some good interest here and bring out a nice progression. I have come to enjoy a lot of things about this piece, but mostly is that it probably took a lot of time and effort to put this together. But anyways very nice work here and was pleased to be able to review your work here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the shine is nice but maybe if it was more of a sparkle might look better

~X~

FrankenToon responds:

Thanks so much for the feedback and compliments! You're right, I could totally see more sparkles around the eyes and other areas. I don't usually get helpful critiques so this means a lot, thanks again!!

[Neighborhood cats]

Nice Pixel

The pixel is simular to sprite stuff but then its not, so nice pixel stylish art here, Pixel style has its own element and seems like it would take much more time and effort and what you have here is really amazing you make the pixel become its own art style so nice effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You dont need to change anything this was fantastic.

~X~

[I, Robot]

Happy

Nice work. I think the use of big squares for eyes was a nice touch and gave this character a personality of its own and depth to something we see as an ordinary robot. I love the use of a background light on this and how much you kept this piece of work unique to the work you've been doing and not a basic robot vector artwork. The outline of your robot match well to the color theme you've got going on and you've allow a nice flow of the piece by thinking about consistentcy. I do love this and I think this is your first submission so good job for a first time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My only crtique here is maybe add a border with some deep reds in there or yellows.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm first submission...? Had to check, but no, I think this one came later. :) Glad you liked it though! I'm not as big a fan of borders I think, but might be worth experimenting with yeah. Thanks again!