XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #22 Wacom Issue #98]

Notbad

Sounds like you've got a lot of issues with your computer based on what you've written here. I mean, wow, this isn't a good thing to have such lag on a computer and maybe that is why you focused solely on the text of this art and then dressed it up with colors and effects? I do like your ability to create textures and effects with just lines and not using some other program to fancy it up. You have raw talent in that ability and I do enjoy the creative types of text you come up with using your free-hand. I wouldn't really change anything here but the last line, it is a bit small and harder to read then the other lines, so work on at a bit I think.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more size and stability to the last sentence of your image here

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Well I did, but it's mostly exaggerated in favor of the message. :) It's not as noticeable outside of Flash, and heavier (on detailed) drawings like this. The more lines you add the slower it gets, so my style does require some extra resources. I did get an upgrade on RAM this same year I think. Still bit limited GPU though (no GPU at all actually, just integrated).

As for the last line it's meant to trail away and become nigh unreadable though, like the problems never end. Thanks for the review!

[TopOfTheWorld]

WOW

Ok this one here is really neat and a good addtion to Robot day submissions. I see it is an older one and that is fine. nothing wrong with some older works being added in. So this was cool I like the robot climbing up here, but there should be more shine on the robot parts or textures to show shine and some sparkle on the electricity. Those changes could work and maybe something with the background color cause the sky should be dark but other then that this was pretty cool so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more shine on the robot and sparkle in electricity

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Definitely something I'd have worked more on today. :) My gradients and successive shadowing were like my shine back in the day. Thanks for reviewing!

[Nezumi Go! [shock beta]]

Fantastic

So this was fantastic but the animation could be a faster tempo and all, but this was a nice job here, I like what you have done here and its this kind of sprite detail I really enjoy seeing, the detail the shine, the sprite world comes alive with sprite work like this, so props to you for some nifty sprite work, and keep making more just like this entry here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the animation could be a faster tempo and all, but this was a nice job here

~X~

[SKATE FAST EAT ASS]

Nice

So this was cool, the "BLUE" theme here was pretty awsome and the logo saying here was cute I think some added shine and sparkle maybe comming off the glasses would be pretty cool, if you ask me, Desire to create thats what you have here, You have brought this to life this type of design is always an eye opener and keeps the viewer interested in what you brin forward. you show some good Dedicated and make this piece somewhat Mythical so for me this is a Grand piece of art that Radiates with flavour. You bring a fluid piece that brings talent and tons of energy, great effort aswell, so very nice work here and it was a huge pleasure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some added shine and sparkle maybe comming off the glasses would be pretty cool, if you ask me

~X~

[Alien Lovers]

Cute

The transparent streaks in the sky could serve as both "MIST-AND-BEAMS" from the moonlight, All in all it is well done for it aids in the creation of the "PERFECT-NIGHT-SKY", The additional stars are just as nice for they seem to be set in a manner that does not disturb the scenery, The presence of hearts everywhere along with what could be two parents adoring their child expresses a simple yet powerful message of unconditional love.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not much at all you have some nice work maybe some added glow on the stars that form a heart.

~X~

[Koromon Icon]

Cool sprite work

Nice animated sprite here, its simple and subtle but also "UNIQUE" maybe think about adding some sparkle on the animation part of it all, Sprites have always made art and games go around even movies so keep making great "SPRITE" stuff, Its the shine the the unique element that sprite work brings out and has that nostalgic feel of yester year, but anyways this was a nice piece of work you have here make more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe think about adding some sparkle on the animation part of it all

~X~

[Rick And Morty Drink and Draw]

AWsome

So there was some nice characters in this "ONE" love that you filled the whole canvus with all sorts of activity, you should make more of these maybe like a seies of moments in the series, Wow this was awsome I am loving the art style here and love the animation that you put in here aswell, bringing more of a live effect the skelliton itselff is well done and gives that dark elements so props to you on this wonderfull and dark piece. Kind of Symbolic but as always Appropriately done with some nice Polish, So some very good stuff here, A refreshing piece of art and design, and shows off the talent from within, and shows you really outdid yourself with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
love that you filled the whole canvus with all sorts of activity, you should make more of these maybe like a seies of moments in the series

~X~

[Epic Dragon]

Nice Dragon

Beautiful execution of a "MYTHICAL-CREATURE" The pencil has done wonders for this art piece the right amount of shading adds what seems to be fur, scales, and definite structure all in one, Those qualities are essential in bringing this "CREATURE-TO-LIFE" through the paper The angle gives a complete view of the creature which also helps in creating a liveliness for it and so that was that a beautiful art piece and I enjoyed reviewing this piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some fancy dragon like borders on this would be a nice touch up.

~X~

[Depths of Ocean]

Some interesting Sprite work

Some nice "GROUP" of sprites here you should think about animating these somewhat, they are pretty good but animated might be a nice element, You make the sprite work shine there is some artistic value in sprite work like this, I love the little details that you ad onto the sprite work as "IT-DOES-SHOWCASE-WELL" here on this submission, so very nice work here and "I-LOOK-FORWARD" to even more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
they are pretty good but animated might be a nice element

~X~

[SmileyMassacre]

Another good full image

Here was another cool one you have here, this one here well, I really like the character you have, kind of like a pacman type standing in front of a wall but looking like he went through the wall like the Kool-Aid man. That was a nice job the character work is fantastic and it really made me laugh. The coloring was great and the background was nice to see something fully completed and not a sketch type with all the additons and props and settings. so nice job indeed on this nice piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe more blood off the pacman

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Interesting similarities. XD I can see them too now... always looked at this one more like just a twisted smiley. Like the title. And yes, the lack of blood is kinda mystifying! Glad you got a laugh out of it though! Old things seem good for such things.