XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Leap Stone]

Very fantastic Art

And here you are once again with some nice artwork here, the "VIEW-SHOT" is pretty good and the lighting effects are even better, I have no updates or changes for this piece as you have presented some solid artwork here it was fantastic as it is, And once again I have found a nice art piece here, its a goodpiece that shows your effort, and you really went out of your way, I may have a few ideas for some slight change later though. It was a Delightful submission and you had a really good Presentation overall, so nice job here. So before I end this review I do want to say that you have gave some good insight to the effort and talent you bring fourth and this was just one example, glad I had the chance to have a fun experience with this.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I have no updates or changes for this piece as you have presented some solid artwork here it was fantastic as it is

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[Zone-tan Tentacle Seat]

Very unique

So you have some really nice unique design here the characters here like the October and the girl riding him was pretty. Good some very nice element here you have impressed me with this one all this needs is more background detail though

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added background detail

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[Shiozaki Ibara - BnHA Action Shot]

I like it

So nice work here I really like the art here and you have a nact for some awsome charchter work here that lighting effect was pretty good too you really know how to ad nice effects I would suggest more domminant lighting comming in on the girl

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More domminant lighting effects

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[Tiny RWBY/FFIII Jobs #1]

Nice

So some more great characters here this was pretty nice I love the massively good detail like shines and sparkles you have some really good eye for detail anyways nice work here hope to see more from you soon

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No ideas or suggestions this time

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[Cutting Edge]

Subtle

So this was a "SUBTLE" and simple piece of "ART" here I like the sketch for what it is and theres nothing wrong with some black and white sketch, Now I do think some tid bits of color might spice things up here and thats just an idea but anyways really great stuff here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Now I do think some tid bits of color might spice things up here

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[Machine II]

The Detail

Now this was some massive "DETAIL" and it shows off really nice, I think some more shine and sparkle off the metal and other parts of this would be pretty cool, So I like to Extended this review with a bit more here, These kinds of art pieces always seem to bring something a little extra, but these do take a little more time to take in with the interesting visuals, I love your Desire on this and the deep passion when pushing forward the efforts and bring some good energy, You have some nice work here, and while theres so much you can do with this, you didnt need too because what you have is already in great detail.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think some more shine and sparkle off the metal and other parts of this would be pretty cool

~X~

[One Rat's Quest]

Cool

So this was a "SIMPLE" yet nifty little art piece I like that it was black and white and it is a sketch afterall, I think if you added some spots of color it would be kind of unique, but anyways nice work here a good sketch if you ask me it has some nice style here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think if you added some spots of color it would be kind of unique

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[Carlie's Text]

Notbad

So this was notbad it was a great "VIEW-SHOT" and the "LIGHTING-EFFECT" was even better too because it came upwards too or seemed that way, I think you could have added more domminant lighting effect here more onto the character, anyways great work here looking good.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think you could have added more domminant lighting effect here more onto the character

~X~

[Belly]

Decent

So this was pretty good, the "HAIR" was really shiny, the backround was odd but seems like it didnt fit well with the main character maybe some more added stuff in the backround, but you have some nice work here and most of all you have an amazing character here that shows off your talent here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the backround was odd but seems like it didnt fit well with the main character maybe some more added stuff in the backround

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[Machi scribble 01]

Cute art

So this was some "CUTE-ART" here it almost reminds me of some "PIXEL-ART" it was a bit bland though especially in the backround and I could see you adding a little more depth in the backround even as some subtle props and such, But anyways thi was pretty good work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
it was a bit bland though especially in the backround and I could see you adding a little more depth in the backround even as some subtle props and such.

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MachiToons responds:

hmm... yea i get what you're saying, but a scribble is a scribble afterall haha
I meant this mostly just as a warm-up, since I hadn't drawn it quite some time, personally those simple backgrounds are just a way for me to add strong contrast, a color study so to say.

Thanks for the tip regardless, I agree there's just a tad too much negative space in this