XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Broadhill Ward Nine]

Decent

So not sure what all this is but has some nice black and white tones to it and seem to reflect off eachother I think you could actually ad more color and color tones to the black and white for an extra touch about it but overall it's a simplistic and decent art piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color would be really cool

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[Uuhhhhh, Tree Between Two Slopes or something I dunno]

Cool

So this was cool I like the tree and sun I think you could do a few things here like have more sun beam beating down on the ground and tree and more green grass and such growing but besides that this was a good background scene so nice effort here I look forward to even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added grass and some added sun beam

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[Spooky Trio]

Nice spider web

So here was another fine spooky piece love the added head in the web speaking of the web you should have some web points sparkle a bit like silk threading might and some added shine on the hair tops would be another suggestion anyways keep up the interesting work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle on the web and shine on the characters hair tops

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[Hello]

Very nice

So this was cool I really like the vibrant colors here and like all the spooky flavor you added to this I think the only area of advice and opinion I might go with this would be having some stars in the black background but that's just an idea and suggested idea at that

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some stars in the background

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[Alternate Reality Mockup]

Quality work

You can really see the quality of the work I like these before and after mock up types you really creat the detail and shine they deserve I could see you adding more shine and sparkle maybe even giving it some greenish effect but other then that this was pretty solid stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some things mentioned

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[Waku Waku Zombie Apocalypse]

Wow nice

So this was a great action scene here lots to see and some nice colors here I can't help but want to know more because you create some great mock ups and action scenes and this was just the start of something so glad to see stuff like this is Sprite

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more action Sprite mock ups

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[Must... Reach... 2nd Loop...]

Wow

So this was cool it has an Egyptian flavor to it like designs and langauge you see in an Egyptian tomb and you presented it with some nice color and nice Sprite work here so I like the style and like the idea here you should do more like this but anyways nice work here really nice

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed

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[Go on my pathetic pawn and destroy Cadence! >:)]

Very cool

So here was a very cool set and I do mean cool I love chess myself and this was just a cool set love the color too just everything fits well and you have managed to make it shine with glory just some beautiful Sprite work and that color just really jumps out at you so nice detail here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really couldn't find any changes that needed anything

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[Girl With Umbrella]

Bat umbrella

I like the bat umbrella nice touch there love the dark tones in this piece and love the dark feel and vibe you push on your art style color and darkness along with a good idea make this such a beautiful piece of art and I'm very impressed with your style so keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
With this piece no changes needed

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Jomoko responds:

Thank you!

[The Woman In The Skull Mask]

Nice

Now this was a very nice piece I really love what you do here with lighting and and dark elements the color is top notch and design of your piece is solid the stars are cool but I would suggest having some bigger and some smaller some dimmer and some brighter

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some star lighting and size

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