XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pengting]

Nice work

So a great character here, I love the white hair here Maybe adding some shine on his head reflecting off of the moonlight, this was a nice scene here you have some nice detail here and made nice element of darkness and lighting effects, So really nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe adding some shine on his head reflecting off of the moonlight

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[Bring Your Kids To Work Day]

This was interesting

So this was an interesting piece would also make for a good comic piece for "DAVE-AND-CARL", but thats for another time, the art was great all the little details was nice on this and I was pretty impressed with this one, No need for any changes on this one you have made a great madness day entry.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No need for any changes on this one you have made a great madness day entry

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[Thirsty]

Once again entertaining

Is that "BLOOD" not sure but seemed so lol, I really liked how this one turned out the comic is always full of entertainment and crazy antics, Once again you bring us some fun entertainment with some good excitement from start to finish, the characters are always a blast to see what adventure or well "EXECUTED-JOKE" the comic takes them on.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes on this fine entry

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[Lisa Loud]

Simple and fresh

This was some simple and "FRESH" art it also reminded me of the old classic cartoons of the past, the "COLORS" are fresh and this has a nice sleek look about it with some really nice visual point here, maybe as some added effects you could make all the liquid and solutions have a glow to represent some energy to them, a good art piece you have here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe as some added effects you could make all the liquid and solutions have a glow to represent some energy to them

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LuchoVolke responds:

Thank you very much! I'm very glad you liked it. It's kinda oldie, but since then I've been polishing this UPA-ish style, adding some texture (in this piece the brushes carry all the texture) and contrast and such.
Again, thankies! :D

[Once in a dream...]

Beautiful

A very beautiful here the girl is adorble the character work is fantastic and the hanging stars are a nifty idea now as an add on to the stars make some sparkle make some glow brighter and some that are just dimmer, Well thats just a suggestion anyways you do some good work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the hanging stars are a nifty idea now as an add on to the stars make some sparkle make some glow brighter and some that are just dimmer

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Ryouhiko-Ankuu responds:

Thanks for your review! Definitely too late to edit this exact work since it's way too old, but your suggestion will come in handy in some future works.)

[Ojiro Mashirao - BnHA Action Shot]

Nice charchter

So some nice charchter here this one was awsome kind of reminds me of Luke from starwars but anyways no changes needed here on this one as it was some solid work you really outdid yourself with this one here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes here

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[Kaminari Denki - BnHA Action Shot]

Nice

Now this one comes with lighting so an idea as soon as I saw this one would be that you could use that yellow lighting to be surrounding the border to form it's own lighting border but your charchter is amazing and you have a fantastic charchter here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A lightning border to relate to the character would be cool

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[Hatsume Mei - BnHA Action Shot]

Nice

Another great charchter love that she is rocketing or propelling forward that flames or light beam could be more stronger you have great charchter detail and it shows here but anyways keep up the good work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes on this one

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[Bear On A Unicycle]

Bear On A Unicycle Nice

So a Bear On A Unicycle, haha now I have seen it all because this was some pretty nice work here, maybe as an idea you could do a series of these maybe one is this bear maybe another time a clown and so on might make for a good series for some unique characters, your art here was amazing.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe as an idea you could do a series of these maybe one is this bear maybe another time a clown

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[More Doodles]

Nice

So this was cool, and you have some nice black and white "DETAIL" this is one of those pieces you could ad some color or maybe just parts of it has some color, but overall this was pretty good and a good black and white drawing and sketch, so keep making some fancy sketches.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
his is one of those pieces you could ad some color or maybe just parts of it has some color

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SquizofrenicCat responds:

Hehe, thanks for the very nice criticism! This is very old so I'm honestly surprised.
I'll be posting some of my tumblr stuff in the future, your feedback on color is actually very useful. I haven't worked on many colored pieces as of late.