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[Inktober #27 Dalmation 2]

Better

So this one here, this one is like a different version of your last dalmation picture and it is much more in-depth and detailed and has the suggestions I had given in the last review. I like the way the border cuts off the background with a solid white but that the background itself is a green color that makes it a more complete piece and gives it some pop. I am sad the X is gone, but the X wasn't really needed when recreating this work and piece. I do think you have something good here and the improvements are a plus so keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to really change here.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

It's like I read your mind even before you wrote the previous one huh. ;) Glad you liked it! Pretty happy with how it turned out too.

[Pixel Pico Sprites]

Wow

Okay these right here well they are pretty neat and interesting. I do think they need a bit more details in a background, but as they are sprites you are showcasing to use, I understand why you stuck with the black background as that will make it easier to transfer over if any users wish to use them in their game. I think the detail and expressions in each character of PICO is nice and I would hope you'd still finish your game. There is always time, even if a short version where you toss him and see how far he goes, you know, something basic, it would always be a good addition and interesting to view. Don't give up on things you start, because I am liking what I see so far.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should make this into that game you wanted to make

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Right about the background, and a bit more aesthetic than say pink or green... which seemed to be the goto colors for sprite sheets back in the day! Hmm yeah, Toss The Pico... that could be something! Nice idea. I still hope to finish the real game some day but that could be a cool spin-off thing...

[Suennette relax]

Nice art

So this was pretty cool, you are talented for sure your style shows that and every little detail shows that, I cant think of anything I would change on this piece as this was a solid piece of art here, Well here is a piece that sparks some interest well with me atleast, some things could be better but you have shown some decent effort here. Now I must say before I do head out, that this piece is the reason why I love to review, and hope to review and view great talent stuff like this in the future, but untill then keep making some brilliant stuff because you have some fatastic styles of work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I cant think of anything I would change on this piece as this was a solid piece of art here

~X~

[Adam & Eve]

Very artistic

I really like this one here, you have some very good ideas with "COLOR" and you know how to blend them well too, the visual here was nice with the apple and such, and love what you did with the backround and give off a nice artistic design here, I really wouldnt suggest anything here but If I did it may be a sparkle off the apple, anyways good stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really wouldnt suggest anything here but If I did it may be a sparkle off the apple

~X~

[Shattered Memories]

Cool

Nice pencil and shading work on this one, this was pretty good some deep shades on this, You may want to think about adding a border on this piece here it is stylish to need one, Well here we have another good drawing or sketch as some may call it but I found it to be good work even with none or little color to it, its really good stuff, now adding color later wouldnt hurt either, but I like your drawing and design here with all of its black and white style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You may want to think about adding a border on this piece here it is stylish to need one

~X~

[Cyberdevil 2013]

Okay

Ok this one here is okay but I wish there was more. I do love your smiley face and character design on this one. I think the "RED" horns were a nice touch and it overall had a good design theme but there needs to be more work done on the body. I found the depth you used in the body to be okay, but you need to keep that consistent with the rest of the work. The body and head don't match up in depth. I do love the head tho, the smile type demonic devil face worked and you added some nice glow to the face. I wish you added a background to this one. I do think it would have really made it feel more completed and helped with the depth issues. Overall it was okay and I would hope to see this again with changes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More work as stated above, more depth all over.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah the body was... pretty basic! It was for a credits section though, so no background, just the character.

[Common elf]

Realistic

So this was really nice and very "REALISTIC" and yes I could see this elf in a forrest or some small village of elves, its a nice painting maybe you should think about adding a border or frame that relates to elfs or something, anyways nice job here this was pretty cool.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe you should think about adding a border or frame that relates to elfs or something

~X~

[Inktober #31 Monsters InKolor]

Good improvement

This one here is another re-imaging of your last work, but this time you took some time to get it done and I think that paid off very well. The color additions to this was much needed and very well executed. I did like how erie and sinister this one was in the past, and even in black and white that worked out well, but the color really makes it come alive and have more details. You understand what is what, where which monster is, and how it all works together. Before it all seems a bit lost inside each other with a flow of black to black lines and no ending or starting point. With the color you really bring out where things beginning and end in a detailed and exciting environment.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really love the end results here

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Glad you like it. :)

[Benjamin N.]

~X~

This was an interesting "DRAWING" here I like the red eye you could make that red I glow a bit more and I would suggest some added backround would also be nice too, you have a nice drawing here simple yet complex too, keep maing dwaings like this its a nice design and artistic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the red eye you could make that red I glow a bit more and I would suggest some added backround would also be nice too

~X~

[Inktober #24]

Wow

Ok now this one here your work here is wow, the two faces, the detail, this is all really good stuf for inktober ink work. The use of lines into other lines to create shading and texture detail was really nice and the spot and splashes of color when needed really made this pop out and create a flow from face to face. I think you have something good here, and I was just saying "WOW" when I saw this one. I do think you have too much white space tho, and if you crop this, you'll see the faces more and the character alltogether more in detail and sizing. That is really up to you but it is something I'd consider for the next round of ink work, but your inktober work is always a blast to view.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I liked this one as it is but you could crop the white space out more and make the main character a bit bitter in sizing.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I'm pretty wowed by the wow factor of your review here! XD I felt like this one came across just a bit... off, but there is an improved version later on. Think you might've reviewed that one already. Glad you liked this too though, and solid advice (already used)!