XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mount Lady - BnHA Action Shot]

Wow nice

And once again you have impressed me with some beautiful work once again the upfront and in your face is really awesome it's like she's leaping into action and that subtle border you have is nice and seems to work well I think you could add to the border maybe have flames in it or maybe a neon glow to it overall this was nice work indeed just an idea here and that's all it is is just an idea anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above

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[Burning Warmage]

Holy cow

Now this has to be some of the best detail and deep textuture piece that you have here and others the armor is intense and the detail within the armour is really intense you do some amazing work the axe was a beautiful piece too with a nice design all around very nice work here as for improvement ideas maybe some added shine to the axe would suffice but overall this was some amazing work very well done here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on the axe

~X~

[Mina Ashido - BnHA Action Shot]

Nice splash

So this was a nice splash effect into the world of art here the border was simple bu was also effective and it all balanced out with the creative charchter work here so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more like this

~X~

[Final Fantasy Lesson 1.01]

Another comic

Nice another comic you should really think about adding a long running comic based on this element would be a plus on things anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I see a long running comic strip idea here

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[Final Fantasy Lesson 1.02]

Good little comic

So this was a funny one and reminds me of all those moments of gaming and no maps lol but you should make a nice comic from this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a comic strip from this

~X~

[Heaven&Hell]

Nice

Well here is a nice piece of "ARTWORK" the whole heaven and hell theme is pretty good, I do think this could have been much larger then you could have used more of the canvus or paper to show lots more of the heaven and hell world and conflicts, thats just an idea but what you do have here is a nice art piece of two angels anyways nice detail in this piece it was a vibrant piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think this could have been much larger then you could have used more of the canvus or paper to show lots more of the heaven and hell world and conflicts

~X~

[Inktober #5]

Nice doodle

Ok so this here is pretty nice and good for a doodle and the space is fully covered so you didnt just draw one thing and move on which is always nice to see in art. I am glad you used one full color for this, except for the text, because it really flows well this way. I know some color variations are always good, but this works but it is ink art and that type can all be consistent. I like the text but the color of the text is light, very light, and I almost can't read the text here, so maybe next time just darken up the color and give it more to read off of. The hints of blacks within the blue was a nice touch and shows a highlight to more important aspects of the art here. Overall very good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Darken the color of the text and you have something perfect

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Cyberdevil responds:

Good advice, thanks! Glad you liked it too!

[Inktober #4]

Decent

I think this one is much better than the last one you've created. I love the use of the greens and the splatter you've got going on to create an almost texture like feeling in the background of the art. I do think inktober is your thing and you've always got a good set of skills when it comes to creating your own text. I probably have said it before that you should be making your own fonts for submissions and showcasing that skills. The only thing I would think you should change is how close the text is to the art of the light, because the colors are so similar you are losing the text and the image in sort of a mesh way, so maybe next time add a color in there or space out your text more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Space out text from the art and just keep them from getting too close

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Cyberdevil responds:

Spaced out text, check. :) Honestly wasn't that happy with how this one turned out, it does feel crammed together... and blended together too. Thanks for the review!