XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #20]

Simple and good

Oh good I am glad you are trying something else out here, I do like the use of lego and not another Luffy piece (no offense because as they are good, they get a bit boring). I like the red you picked out and the line shine detailing inside the lego block is pretty accurate. I think the font under it is great and you have a nice steady hand for fonts but you know I enjoy those already. I do think the white space here is okay but a border wouldnt hurt, maybe smaller legos as a border? I do think this one was good and nice to look at.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A border could be added, maybe small legos all around in a square? Just an idea but nice job

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

No offense taken, though if you're going through my older work... best prepare yourself. ;) Smaller legos hmm, that could be something! Thanks for the review!

[Temptation]

Adorble

This piece here was pretty "ADORBLE" here maybe its the view shot but the legs seems a tad short from that view not sure exactly, just a little thing I noticed on this one, you have some amazing work great character detail and beautiful girl here, make more like this soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe its the view shot but the legs seems a tad short from that view not sure exactly, just a little thing I noticed on this one

~X~

[Mobile]

Wow very nice

I guess it really was a "VOODOO" mobile lol great humor this one just needs some added color and detail in the backround, This one was like a speeding train meaning you pushed the limits on this one as fast as can go, the ideas stood out very well and it all came together in a nice fasshion I was pretty impressed, so nice work here on this one, I like what you have presented.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
just needs some added color and detail in the backround

~X~

[Inktober #12]

Excellent

I think this one here, well this one was nice and had a fun element to it. I think the light red with yellow is the proper demonic colors to use and really worked well as an entire piece. I do think you could have added more of a border to this one and then gave it a more completed look. I also find the lines a bit too fuzzy, like the image is getting lost in a bit of a mess, but it is still good non the less. I think that you have a good talent with inktober submissions, but this one feels like it could have had more to it and I know you can do more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail, add a border but nice overall

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I'd say sketchy more than fuzzy, which I was going for a bit here, but thanks for the feedback! With the background in particular do feel it could've been clearer.

[Inktober #11]

Nice change

Good job on doing something a bit different. I do like the change here and adding a hiaku. What an odd one tho, where did the dragon come from why is he sipping? So many questions, but good use of characters to match your hiaku. I think the line art is good for solid black inking and I do love your font as always, but I feel this one could have done with some color. I mean it is a dragon and those stand out much more with color and pizzaz. I think just next time add color and you'll be good. This did remind me of an old newspaper cartoon and really looks professional.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try adding some color nice time, more so to the dragon

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

So many questions, and alas, no answers! XD If I recall correctly I was going for the most random thing I could think here. Mission accomplished? Good advice with the color, do think that would've looked better here. TY for the reviews!

[AnnaSophia Robb Vector]

Well this was cool

So this was pretty cool I like the idea here and the art is somewhat artistic with colors and such and a good little portrait you have going on here, I was really impressed with this one, maybe ad some sort of portrait frame here, anyways some nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe ad some sort of portrait frame here

~X~

[Potatoman Begins: Page 9]

Somany entries

That little "GREEN" guy was cute he just stole it from potatoman lol, Wow Im just amazed at howmany of these entries you have, you must have had a lot of free time back in the day, anyways onto this particular submission, these characters they just crack me up and made me chcukle almost out of my chair so nice job on that, good stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changees here it was a great entry.

~X~

[Inktober #8]

Decent

Ok this one needs work. You have great drawings and snow, and even a character from snow, but it is just too damn light in color. I had to really squint and look at this to see the details and all that. Maybe you were going for that snow-storm, white-out, effect, but it was just too much for me. I would make the vibrance of the blues more aparent and then darken the blue balls and character a bit. Maybe you could even add a glow to them to give the snow effect still and not lose the color to all this white? I think it is white-washed and I see great work behind that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The blue balls and character are lost in the white, so make them darker so you see them better, but good job non-the-less

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I'm noticing that these drawings really look a bit different with different monitors, and with the one I'm currently viewing it through: can definitely see what you're getting at! At home it was so much clearer. Whiteout effect yes, but not this much... I'll keep this in mind.

[Cleaning]

I like this one

A "SMUDGE" lol nice joke there, some added color on this would be a nice idea, Well that was a nice submittion of the comic, I can really see you building onto it aswell maybe a new character or two, or some side character, also more action and cliffhangar scenes would be a big plus too, but overall This was a good entry for the comic so nice job. I love how well these progress and cant wait for even more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added color on this would be a nice idea

~X~

[Racing With Gilda Gryphon]

Cool

This was cool I think ad in some wind streaks to show they are like racing, the characters are cute and adorble though and pretty good art piece here very nice use of color aswell, but adding some wind streaks would be a plus here if you ask me, anyways nice work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think ad in some wind streaks to show they are like racing

~X~