XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[As the Bombs Fall (IF19 - Shelter)]

Nice

So this was pretty good I thought the green explosion beams are nice but seems like it needs much more vibrant hlowing beams if explosive visual here you did pretty good for the most part though and I really liked this just needs a bit more to it so really nice job here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More glow more neon beams

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #1.05]

Nice time loops

Haha this one takes me back the art is awesome here some really nice work some nice humor added to this one too you have outdone yourself once again beautiful piece here so nice work indeed hope to see many more by you

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Just make more

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[Golden Jack Returns]

Notbad

A good charchter here really nice work I love the white background on this one seems like with the white background you could have some streaks of light streaking the character was pretty good but anyways really nice work here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some streaks of lighting in the background

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[Illustration Friday 4 - Bouquet]

Nice

So this was a nice piece here I love that it's a big thing of flowers the texture is pretty deep on this piece you really made it flourish with the visual here and the character face in the middle was a nice touch you have some nice ideas here I would ad some shine and sparkle here maybe to represent some sparkly flowers but regardless this was pretty good work you have here so nice job on this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added shine to the flowers

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[Illustration Friday 5 - Whimsical]

Really beautiful piece

This one speaks volumes here with all the Ray's of energy comming out of the violin as it's like energy and sound just jumping out here so anyways nice work on this one the character design is absolutely beautiful here and I really enjoyed your work here so make more soon I would suggest even more of that Ray's of light just teasing out maybe even in some added color too so really nice job here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More Ray's of light comming from the violin

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[Moody Sightseeing]

Wow

This was something good here a nice sight seeing moment a top some building seems like the lighting could be better and have more glowing aspects about it better because you really have an opertunity to show the effects of lighting with glow and auras but regardless you have done some really nice work here on this one I like the style here on this one great charchter and great expression on his face with deep thinking as anyone would anyways really great work here some nice job here keep making beautiful art

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More vibrant lighting from the city below

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[Gina Shaking It (GIF)]

Nice bounce

Wow this was a really good bounce you have here some nice elements to the bounce you have that bounce flowing like the real thing also like the animation on the background stars rally some nice work here hope to see more

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Not sure I would change stuff but if I had to maybe some color in the background stars

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PaddleTone responds:

Thanks! I'll definitely be posting more in the future!

[Ink/Goretober Day 7]

Really nice

And you have some really good detail in this one I especially love the teeth here and the colored ink was nice I thaught you did well and the color makes it come out so well so I'm impressed with this piece make more with this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe ad even more color

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #1.04]

Cool

So this was cool maybe not as good as your other comic pieces but still a fun piece I thought it was rather interesting and a fun style here good comic element here on this submission I like this comic series you have going

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added humor in this one would be nice

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[Huntress]

Greatness

Now this was pretty intense here some nice "REALISTIC" view here I like the form of the character and the expression was just intense, Maybe some added shine and sparkle on the weapon she is holding, Very Impressive art style you have here this was a pretty solid piece you have covered alot of stuff and pushed the limits on this piece. This brings us close to the ending of the review so While this was notbad at all I wouldnt mind seeing more to it, it was generally a good and decent art piece and the effort does show, I like how you presented this and it was just pretty decent so nice job indeed.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
shine and sparkle on the weapon she is holding

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clayscence responds:

thank you very much for your input!! I really appreciate it :)