XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vivian James - Fanart]

I nice charchter here

And here was a nice charchter piece here I liked it. I like the color used too not sure if it's me but either her legs look too long or the sweatshirt is too baggy but besides all that the colors are really blended really well with some nice texture the background was notbad but could use some props back there so overall this was pretty good stuff here and really enjoyed it so keep making stuff and as for this one there is no suggested ideas because you have done a fabulous job here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A fabulous job done here no major changes needed

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[Wolfman vs. Werewolf]

Very good detail

Well you have some really nice work here I like the dark element and the black and white element also is a nice touch I love the lighting I do think the lighting could beam more down on the two creatures but overall you have some really nice work love the design on the creatures you did some fantastic work and I'm glad I reviewed it and I hope to review more from you in the near future

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More dominant lighting

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[Happy Halloween! 2014]

Very nice

So this was cool I really like the art piece here with the Halloween theme here the characters are pretty nifty with some nice design and some nice detail with all the nifty extras so really nice work here I wouldn't mind some added sparkle and shine on some of the nifty extras but overall this was pretty good work here hope to see more from you sometime soon I look forward to more of these creative designs

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More shine and more sparkle

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #13-2.02]

Ohmy

So this one was a tad bit hardcore and you show off some brutal beat down lol the blood effect was nice that poor little guy though but regardless you should make more submission like this as they show some good detail

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more blood based ones

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #10-2.03]

Deep texture

So you have some nice and deep texture here well in the background they are very textuture enhanced and look pretty good the topic of the comic is amusing and has an adventure behind it too I still think these are needed to be a tad bit longer but overall I found these to be pretty good too so nice work here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
These could be longer

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #7.03]

Nice

This one was amusing here and some nice charchter work too the bubble text seems kind of small so only change I would make there would be larger text and text bubbles anyways nice work and hope you make more of these

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Larger text and text bubbles

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[80s Shoujo Tomoko]

Very nice

So this was some nice work and a nice looking charchter you have here the detail is pretty impressive the style is nice however I do think you need some added shine in her hair maybe like a streak of shine I would go one step even further and ad some sparkle in her eye there but overall you have done some nice art design on this charracter with some nice structure to go along so really nice job indeed here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Well as mentioned a few above suggested ideas only

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[Creepy Susie And Fire]

I really like this

So you have some really nice animation behind the character and it really came out well. Even like the reflection of the flames on her but seems you could have added the reflection on the rock and the skull at the same time too but you do have some nice take on this whole piece here so really nice work and nice animation too I like your style on this one and do hope you make more just like this one here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Ad some flame reflection to the rock and skull

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #10.03]

Amazing

And in this one you bring some nice action scenes and the art has some really nice detail as well love the texture too so nice job here with some deep detail so keep up the brilliant work that you always do

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Can't change anything as you have pushed out some nice detail

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #10-2.02]

Haha nice

So this was a good idea and I guess glow effects can really go a long way and covering up nude pasta is part of that haha anyways I had a blast with this so keep up the fun and exciting work as you have done here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Can't believe I'm saying this but less glow lol

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