XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Final Fantasy Lesson #T.02]

And another fun one

And once again you have created a really nice comic style here I'm pretty impressed with the outcome of it all I love the close up elements too really nice comic style here so nice job hope to see much more of these anyways cool stuff

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Great comic style doesn't need changes

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[Inktober Day 6]

Really deep art

So this was some really deep art you have here and you have prepared it all on paper and pen and even for an inktober it came off well the small fine detail like the plants was intense here with some really nice work overall so nice detail and I wouldn't think of changing a thing here this was some very talented work so from my point of view this was just fantastic and very artistic aswell

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
As mentioned I wouldn't change it

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[Teen Zevran]

Love the texture

So you have some really nice texture in this one that pose is just perfect and the splatter of all the blood was really nice I do think adding some of that splatter on the edges and forming it like a border if some type would be a pretty good idea and maybe make the visual complete just an idea to think about though you have some nice talent on this piece so keep that going good

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some type of blood splatter border

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[Skinny Dipping Abigail]

Nice

So here was a nice charchter in the water a well designed charchter the water was nice but I believe more energy needs to be put into the matter like bubbles more sparkly effects that water gives off and more wave like feel of the water but everything else is pretty good here with some nice visual effects here and I for sure want to see what else you have next in store for your next project

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A few water additional effects would be nice

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PaddleTone responds:

Yea, I've definitely improved on my design of water since this artwork.

[jack]

Very nice

So this was some really nice work here the character is pretty awsome all though I think some silky shine could be added to some of it's outter shell and gun and sword the background was very intense and we'll designed some added sparkle on the background would also be a plus but overall this was pretty good stuff with some nice visual elements so props to you on this one and all you really need is a tad bit of shine and sparkle

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Well as suggested some added shine some added sparkle here and there

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #CC-7.03]

Oh interesting

Wow this one was more of an interesting one with some nice darker detail on this particular one the lighting effects was a nice touch too great story line on this I do wish these were somewhat longer though keep up the cool style

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make these longer

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #CC-7.02]

Man crushes lol

I guess you do have to be careful with man crushes lol but I do like the art style you been pushing here I really like the comic style and you do so well with this as it's pretty nifty and some nice charchter detail and you make theme funny so really nice job

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more of these styles

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[Follow the Leader: RemnantComic (GIF)]

Love the flow

I love the flow of animation here everything flowed so fluidly and just looked realistic like the flow of the sandles and the skirt bounced as the lift of the pull ups worked it's way through so very nice animation on this as for any improvements maybe more animation from the standing two charchters but you have some nice work here and some nice skills here so keep up the good work on this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some small added animation

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PaddleTone responds:

I didn't want the two girls overshadowing the girl doing pull ups, but I'll remember this for next time!

[Cyberdarklord Comission, Starfire and Raven]

Well this was different

So this was pretty different but I like it and I like the scene here you have tons of props and details to make up the room and the spanking scene is really nice and a red bottom was convincing enough with this one so nice art nice detail and good energy in this art piece here really nice color too I would for sure ad more shiny points and lighting effects but besides that this was amazing work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some lighting effects and shiny points added

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PaddleTone responds:

The environment was really well lit. Where would you suggest adding more shiny points?