XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Teddy Bear is a Mafioso]

Haha cute

He looks pretty "TOUGH" especially with that "GUN" and he seems to look like that "TED" bear too hehe, anyways this was cute I think some added shine on the gun, well the metal part of it all would be a nice touch here, you do some nice work though and you have showcased it well.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think some added shine on the gun, well the metal part of it all would be a nice touch here

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[First]

Cool

This one was different with the "GREY" backrounds you should think about making future entries with this grey backround, Well what can I say this one for sure has given me some laughs and such and a good chuckle and some good quality style and the art is always as good, this was a funny entry though love how this one starts off, I enjoy seeing this comic especially on newgrounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should think about making future entries with this grey backround

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[DVD Player]

Another fun one

I am starting to enjoy these "B/W" ones with some blood moments at the end, anyways nice submission here, So here was another fun one I thaught it was entertaining, the way the script plays out especially in this one it was just fun to see everything evolve to the end, and once again I love the detail you put fourth in these, anyways nice work on this one and I look forward to even more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color for sure.

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[Zoe]

Pretty decent

Alright so this was some pretty "GOOD" art here I was not too fond of the "BACKROUND" but your design and your intent the character was amazing I think more glow on the outter lines would be nice, anyways really nice work here it was some nice and artistic detail here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think more glow on the outter lines would be nice

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[Direction Insanity]

Interesting

Well this was an interesting "DESIGN" I enjoy me some "BLACK-AND-WHITE" now and then and this was a pretty nifty one this one almost seems like its missing some type of borders the same graphics as the arrows would make for a nifty little piece here, but anyways you do some nice work here and I was pleased with this.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
almost seems like its missing some type of borders the same graphics as the arrows would make for a nifty little piece here

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[Story]

Awsome once again

Ideas can kill lol, nice ending on this "ONE" What I like about this one the most is that you really make the story go from a simple point to having a wild adventure and the story along with humor and ofcourse your character designs are just a huge plus, very nice work indeed, I like your style on this entry, keep up the great comic making.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color is always a plus for these older ones.

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[Let´s Go Mint]

Amazing work here

So this was cute and even adorble just a nice and pleasent character and her cuddely little friend here the backround was pleasent aswell, this is one of those pieces that I have no imput in the suggested section because you have done an outstanding job here, so keep it up.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
this is one of those pieces that I have no imput in the suggested section because you have done an outstanding job

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[Disciple of the Storms]

Impressive

Wow this is very impressive you do some "AMAZING" work on these "CHARACTERS" the design and structure is just very beautiful, the wings the claws the weapons just amazing work now ofcourse I do think you need some shine and sparkle on different points like weapon metal and gems and chains and ofcourse sparkly jewlrey, Just some ideas that would put some nice polish on these beautiful designs and creations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you need some shine and sparkle on different points like weapon metal and gems and chains and ofcourse sparkly jewlrey

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[Fortune Cookie]

Nice entry

Nice ending here, these old ones are good the humor was always great, You never know what these guys are gonna be upto but I will say is that they are pretty good stories even if they are a tad short but thats ok because you always make a nice ending and climax of the comic and always leaving more for the next one, great talent by you here on this one and the whole series.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more jokes like this on the new ones would be great.

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[Mr Badass]

Nice Texture

This was cool I like the "TEXTURE" the face was kind of funny But I thaught the "MUSCLES" came off very well with some nice tones and good detail, The only changes I would make on this piece would be adding some backround detail maybe even a back scene of some sort that represents this characters world, just an idea to think about overall this was pretty cool and a nice character here so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The only changes I would make on this piece would be adding some backround detail maybe even a back scene of some sort that represents this characters world, just an idea to think about

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