XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mech Chick]

Good work

Very nice work here first of all I "LOVE" how you have some finoshed "PIECES" and the drawn layout on this its a really nice piece and a nice drawing the lines on the character is pretty smooth and amazing, so my advice here is only two things one being this canvus size should be larger allow for more detail and maybe even have a full colored version on this one, but with all that said this was some amazing work and detail here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my advice here is only two things one being this canvus size should be larger allow for more detail and maybe even have a full colored version on this one

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[Quest for the Christmas Tree Pt.3]

Love it

Haha now its time for the "CHAINSAW" lol funny stuff, Make more colorful and vibrant humor like this one, I love this particular entry because you bring that story out and make it your own the characters really come alive with whatever story you have going on, and overall for wahtever this is you make some nice comics, Now I have not seen anything new in awhile but I still enjoy what you do have especially this submission, nice humor.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more colorful and vibrant humor like this one

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[Potatoman Begins Poster]

Very nice

This was a nice "POSTER" like theme going and a great way to start off the potatoman series, I have to admit that the potatoman has for sure added some depth to the series of dave and carl, but also miss the old funny jokes too, anywyas great art poster here lots of vibrant color here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes its a nice submission.

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[Exam]

Brilliant

I like the "ADDED-COLOR" this was a nifty entry here, Another fine entry into the world of this comic series, Itell you I should get bored but I dont because you bring action, you bring humor, and the characters are just great, but most of all this is always amusing with jokes and humor so nice job indeed. anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should ad more color like this one.

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[The Hawk And The Fairy]

Nice secne

So here we have a nice "SCENE" of two flying creatures the "DRAGONFLY" one is very nice and love that "GLOW" the bird behind It I thaught seems like it could use more depth of the 3d effect some added wind lines and wishes that make it seem like they are flying and not as flatt, but regardless I found this whole piece to be pleasent and a nice art piece here so really nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the bird behind It I thaught seems like it could use more depth of the 3d effect some added wind lines and wishes that make it seem like they are flying and not as flatt

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[trinity]

Artistic

Wow this was pretty "ARTISTIC" you have some really nice color theme going here too, I do think some outter type of border would have been nice with this it might accent the main piece here you can have in the same reflection as the focus point of art, anyways great stuff here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some outter type of border would have been nice with this it might accent the main piece here you can have in the same reflection as the focus point of art

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[Lottery]

LOL

Just "19,999" to go lol very funny one here, I would only suggest adding some color, Another great one that you have presented us with, very nice work here, I want to see more characters and more crazyness from these characters, but then again the subtle adventures also work too your story lines are just great and make for some nice stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would only suggest adding some color

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[Stalking huntress]

Love your characters

So these "DRAGON" like characters you make are very nice ideed, you ad so much "DETAIL" love the skin tones and the structure designs on these nifty characters and love what you do with the backrounds, the feathers and the top of the spear needs more shine and sparkl to it, but maybe its not the intent you have some very nice work here love the characrter work you do and hope to see more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the top of the spear needs more shine and sparkl to it

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[The Savior]

Really nice stuff

I like the "GRUNGY" style of the visual here the character itself is pretty welldone and bring out this dark element so very nice work here and I really liked the elements here so no changes here this was a fantastic piece here, I like your work here and this was creative.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I really liked the elements here so no changes here this was a fantastic piece here

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[Fart]

Cool

This was notbad I thaught it could have some better humor or better longer joke, a fun piece here though it was pretty good though, These are always cool, I love the way that you build up the story and give a good ending just like this one it was entertaining, regardless if its your two wild characters or the potato man guy it always seems to be filled with some adventure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added humor ofcourse.

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