XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[In the Hallway (IF17 - Mystery)]

Very nice scene

This was a dark scene here reminds me of a dark show I just watched but you presented some nice elements here love the candles I do think you should make the candles with more of a radiant glow surrounding them other then that this was really good and shows off a scary element in this piece and I was pretty impressed with the whole dark piece here really amazing work you do

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some more light up candles and more glow surrounding them

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[Nyarlathotep the Crawling Chaos]

Beautiful piece

So this was a beautiful piece here the details of this creature is amazing work with some very nice visual here I do think some added signing effects and shine on it's snake like body would show more of the detail on your character here really nice detail though other then that I have no need to change anything on this piece as you have made some fun pieces of art especially this spectacular charchter creature design here so keep making great pieces here I love the darkness but still needs more lighting to it

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added lighting effects and shine

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[As the Bombs Fall (IF19 - Shelter)]

Nice

So this was pretty good I thought the green explosion beams are nice but seems like it needs much more vibrant hlowing beams if explosive visual here you did pretty good for the most part though and I really liked this just needs a bit more to it so really nice job here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More glow more neon beams

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #1.05]

Nice time loops

Haha this one takes me back the art is awesome here some really nice work some nice humor added to this one too you have outdone yourself once again beautiful piece here so nice work indeed hope to see many more by you

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Just make more

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[Golden Jack Returns]

Notbad

A good charchter here really nice work I love the white background on this one seems like with the white background you could have some streaks of light streaking the character was pretty good but anyways really nice work here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some streaks of lighting in the background

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[Illustration Friday 4 - Bouquet]

Nice

So this was a nice piece here I love that it's a big thing of flowers the texture is pretty deep on this piece you really made it flourish with the visual here and the character face in the middle was a nice touch you have some nice ideas here I would ad some shine and sparkle here maybe to represent some sparkly flowers but regardless this was pretty good work you have here so nice job on this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added shine to the flowers

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[Illustration Friday 5 - Whimsical]

Really beautiful piece

This one speaks volumes here with all the Ray's of energy comming out of the violin as it's like energy and sound just jumping out here so anyways nice work on this one the character design is absolutely beautiful here and I really enjoyed your work here so make more soon I would suggest even more of that Ray's of light just teasing out maybe even in some added color too so really nice job here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More Ray's of light comming from the violin

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[Moody Sightseeing]

Wow

This was something good here a nice sight seeing moment a top some building seems like the lighting could be better and have more glowing aspects about it better because you really have an opertunity to show the effects of lighting with glow and auras but regardless you have done some really nice work here on this one I like the style here on this one great charchter and great expression on his face with deep thinking as anyone would anyways really great work here some nice job here keep making beautiful art

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More vibrant lighting from the city below

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[Gina Shaking It (GIF)]

Nice bounce

Wow this was a really good bounce you have here some nice elements to the bounce you have that bounce flowing like the real thing also like the animation on the background stars rally some nice work here hope to see more

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Not sure I would change stuff but if I had to maybe some color in the background stars

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PaddleTone responds:

Thanks! I'll definitely be posting more in the future!

[Ink/Goretober Day 7]

Really nice

And you have some really good detail in this one I especially love the teeth here and the colored ink was nice I thaught you did well and the color makes it come out so well so I'm impressed with this piece make more with this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe ad even more color

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