XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[NG VaultBoy: Level 3]

So these are cool

I have to say that you have done a nice job here on all these the character for one is welldone and love the shadow behind him, I think as a form of suggestion you could have some newground related stuff in the backround but I like the work, nice artwork here.

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I think as a form of suggestion you could have some newground related stuff in the backround

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Luis responds:

Yeah agree. I actually find them kinda ghetto looking now. Neat concept I suppose

[Snowball Fight]

Nice energy here

Well a "SNOW-BALL" fight can go either way I supose lol, make more snow entries like you have here, I really like what you do with the story on these comics, and thats something that I really enjoyed about it because it brings so much fun and entertaining value, Its that value and entertainment thats keeps me wanting more from these characters and action scenes so keep making these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more snow entries like you have here

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[Virus]

Another good story

lol "INFECTED" haha that was a great ending there, Really no changes here it was fine as is, Theres a lot I like about these comics, each character has there own part and humor is always a blast, its that humor that really gives me a chuckle, so while there is adventure the humor keeps it real, so props to you on your part for good writings and jokes aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really no changes here it was fine as is

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[Yinglet and the Traveler]

Loving your work

I am enjoying your work here on the grounds, you really know how to use color and make it blend that ground was really intense with some nifty detail, there is really not much I would change about this piece you have done some solid work here, hope to see more though.

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not much I would change about this piece you have done some solid work here

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[[Cosplay] Kaneki Ken 1]

Interesring

So this was another part of the cosplay looks pretty good it was interesting and not sure how you can improve on this as it's pretty good as is it's nice work here and I like the energy that you bring into this so no changes on this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
None with this piece

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[Wraeththu ~ Equilibrium Icon]

Nice icon

So this was pretty cool I like the depth of this piece the colortone really looks good and I think this could use some type of frame that accents the art piece here this was pretty artistic though so keep up the good work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some frames on this would be cool

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[the last tankman]

Tankman

And then there was one, so this was pretty cool, I especilly like the "CRACK" in the goggles this whole piece would be pretty good if it was in color, or even parts of it was in color the wording could be in a better font even, but overall this was pretty good drawing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color wouldnt hurt. and some fancy wording

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[BBQBEEFBURGERMAN]

Notbad This was kind of cool

So this was kind of cool and seems to represent alot of things going on with america and such, as for the "ARTWORK" its pretty good but could be larger and such, like the canvus could be larger and I wouldnt mind some "TEXTURE" in this one, but anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added texture and a larger canvus.

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[Girl Trooper]

Very cool

So here was a nice character piece, the expression on her face is really goodm the outfit she has on almost looks like that of a storm troopers outfit from the starwars theme, but nayways nice work here even a nice backround I kind of feel like there should be some type of fancy borders and frames on this piece. but anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I kind of feel like there should be some type of fancy borders and frames on this piece

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[Violence]

Fun characters

Haha that last scene was very "RED" but its expected when it comes to these two characters here, More fun with these characters, they have jokes and have lots of adventure and thats what I really love about this series, and it has not got old or boring and keeps me laughing and chuckling with every new entry so nice job here very welldone work, make much more of this series soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
make more like this one.

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