XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Junk in the Trunk]

Nice

Well this was notbad, the insides outside was a nifty idea, the backround was ok I did think you could have done a little more with the backround maybe some design maybe some lighting effects maybe some more added detail, but you have some awsome talent the character was different but it was also cool.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you could have done a little more with the backround maybe some design maybe some lighting effects maybe some more added detail

~X~

Bunbox responds:

Thank you very much for the thoughtful response! This piece was originally drawn in 2016, and so I absolutely agree with the background suggestion. Around this time in my artwork a lot of my backgrounds were so boring. Hopefully the future uploads in my gallery can reflect the journey I had to try and make them more interesting! : )

[Renaenae's true face]

A strange one

So this was a strange creature you have here, the view screen was again very small so thats something you can think about making larger and such, but besides that this was actually pretty cool looking very good detail like the blood and such, so nice work indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the view screen was again very small so thats something you can think about making larger and such

~X~

[Anthony]

Cool

Another random character with a strange face here so this is one of those that I could see you making the "CANVUS" or "VIEW-SCREEN" larger for more detail and backroun work aswell, these are just some ideas to throw at your way, so nice job on this one, make more of these characters.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
larger view screen and or canvus size.

~X~

[F4NV - Fancy Lads Billboard]

Decent

I love the "OLD" style on this from "CRACKS" to the old fashioned style here, really beautiful work here, You are very talented and it really shows well, so nice effort and some fantastic energy in this one, I dont have any changes for this its a brilliant style of a classic sign so n ice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I dont have any changes for this its a brilliant style of a classic sign

~X~

[Advert]

Nice

Nice "ADVERT" lol another great one, some color would really work well, A nice web comic here, and here those characters at it once again with some crazy antics, this particular entry was really good and some nice visuals on this one, you always amaze me with all that you do in these web comic types, and I am very impressed and look forward to what else you bring to the table, now and the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color would really work well

~X~

[Talk Like A Pirate Day]

Very decent work

lol Act like a pirate day haha nice, some color would be nice on this, You have nice comic here and really look forward to even more, so keep making these fun and unique comic series of adventure and wild times with these enterttaining characters that are always upto crazy moments and ofcourse always giving me some laughs from the enerttaining value your characters go through so nice job there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color would be nice on this

~X~

[Your path ahead]

Notbad

So this was pretty cool, this was something different and something I dont always see on here but your reflection on the detail here is pretty amazing, the shadow effects were fantastic and this whole piece looked pretty realistic, I found this piece delightful hope to see more from you soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no changes it was a delightful piece.

~X~

[Aubrey TAZ]

Artistic

So this was pretty "ARTISTIC" I like the abstract feel and the artistic look to this whole piece, the dark line work is pretty amazing I still feel like there needs to be some work done with the backround atleast some props and some visual scenes here or something but overall this was pretty good stuff.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I still feel like there needs to be some work done with the backround atleast some props and some visual scenes here or something

~X~

[Yinglet Scout]

Nice

So you have some "NICE" art here with a colorful outlook on this piece and I really liked it The backround was somewhat bland but you still filled the area, great looking character here and the color really spices things up so really nice work here, make more of this character and future stuff for us soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
The backround was somewhat bland but you still filled the area

~X~

[Travis]

Good character

Now here was a good character you have here, I like the action scene here and the emotion in his face, I do wish this view screen was much larger because then you can ad some more detail in the backround or even show more of the detail in main piece of the art piece, but anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do wish this view screen was much larger because then you can ad some more detail in the backround or even show more of the detail in main piece of the art piece

~X~