Great Expression
So here there was some really good expression the colors and linework very nice, the blue shirt or top she is wearing seems out of place maybe if it was a pinkish color it might reflect the design better, Layout of the separate locks of hair is very layered being spread out along the entire image Keeping consistent with the given message of a “BAD-HAIR-DAY” The distinction of each strand is made through a "SMOOTH-TEXTURE" of various lines, Each of the strands seem to "OVERLAP" each other again pertaining to an uncontrollable style, The hot pink and bold blue go well with the soft brown of her complexion and hair.
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the blue shirt or top she is wearing seems out of place maybe if it was a pinkish color it might reflect the design better
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