XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clichéd Gothic Crap]

Nice Style

A very nice "STYLE" with this art piece there seems to be some good "EMOTION" on the girls face, I feel like you could have added some backround detail here to tell more of the story that yerns from this, The texture of the drawing is flat, giving way to a clear image of the objects/person, A layered appearance is also noticeable such as the various streaks for her hair and shirt design, "THIS-PROVIDES-DEPTH" through added detailing The dull color scheme and the arrangement of parts of a skeleton in a flowerpot generates a somewhat dark tone, Still the themes of growth from flowers and the theme of death "SKELITON-CLASH", Granting the viewer the freedom in fishing out a message through it all.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I feel like you could have added some backround detail here to tell more of the story that yerns from this

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[Luscious the blue succubus]

Wow nice

Now normally I suggest adding backround but with the awsome use of colors blue for the character and peachish for backround this actually blends well, you have an amazing character here with lots of detail, maybe ad some shine on parts of her front view body, you have some Skillful Talent and its Endless, You should extend some parts in this art, and ofcourse some more polish is always good. this was a Large-Hearted art piece.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe ad some shine on parts of her front view body

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ekajpalm responds:

Thanks for your suggestions mate! I'm happy you appreciate the color choices! As far as sheen goes, I agree with you. I actually tried adding some sheen to her, but it didn't really come out as well as I wanted it to.
perhaps in a later pic I can make it work better.

Thanks again! :D

[Slasher Oni]

Very cool

So this was something "REALLY-COOL" I like the blood and do think some added blood would be nice some dripping blood maybe some splatter on the backround and more glistering shine to the blood, but you do have a nice character here, very weel done keep it up.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More intense and shine to the blood.

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[Blue Arabia]

So this was pretty solid

I really like the "BLUE" element here, the lighting effects come in good here, this was a great piece and only needs even if that maybe some frame work or fancy borders, Each blue shade contributes to a setting during the evening, The darker shadings are more "DOMINANT" over the lighter ones making the entire image very soft "ON-THE-EYES", A light source is apparent however through the "PURPOSFUL" additions of shadows, Structure is also provided for the buildings bestowing a realistic quality upon it, Lack of activity from living beings accompanying the evident late hour leaves a calming impression on the viewers.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
only needs even if that maybe some frame work or fancy borders

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[Me Again]

Very nice

So here was another nice fine "ART-PIECE" you really did bring out some nice detail here love the shadded color you have on this one as it was pretty good work you bring a nice style of creativity and it shows well, the backround was ok but could have some more detail back there, anyways really nice stuff here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
possibly some backround elements if you are inclined to do so, it was a fantastic piece regardless.

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[戦いましょう everybody]

A nice drawing

So here with this one "YOU-HAVE-CREATED" something really nice, the drawing with its sharp lines look "FANTASTIC" something Grand here like the artwork that you have presented here now I wouldnt mind seeing some more efforts but sofar you have the Desire and its welldone a decent job here and I do look forward to more soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe some added color would be nice for this.

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[The sitting chick]

Very nice

So this one was nice I am loving the black and white theme here and you gave her so much expression, another piece here that you should think about framing up or adding borders, The black and white color scheme aims at a tone of "MISERY" from the artist the darkness outweighs the brightness, The latter seeming to be only for a creation of little lighting to outline the woman’s anatomy. "HER-FACIAL-EXPRESSION" posture and the sole object in the background are all sagging or "LOPSIDED" Intensifying the feel of sadness The fact that a chair and the crooked object in the background are the sole furnishings around hint at a theme of loneliness which could explain the evident sorrow surrounding the image.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
another piece here that you should think about framing up or adding borders

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[Sorry Mickey D]

ok

Well that was somewhat amusing, but as for the "ART" you did a fantastic job and presented a nice piece "MICKEY D" looked good lots of great vibrant colors and nice form of the character, the "JOKE" was kind of funny and not so bad so I enjoyed this piece it was decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really wouldnt change things here it was fine as is.

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