XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Onoda Sakamichi]

Very nice

So this was cool I like the detail in this like the small orb he's holding and the look on the face but the yellow background was too bright seemed like it could be a little less on the brightness of it all but regardless this was a nighty and we'll designed charchter here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Less brightness on the background

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[Maya Fey]

Wow nice

So this was a beautiful charchter you have here some nice balance of the color all though I thaught the background could have been a different color theme but overall this was a great charchter here with some nice formation of the character lines and details

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would suggest changing the background color

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[Yugo]

Cool charchter

So this was a cool looking charchter you have going on in this one some nice color use and of course a nice pose you have I like the style here very. Good work and great vibrant visual hope to see more work from you soon

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A good vibrant charchter no changes needed

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[I am the Night]

Wow nice

So this was good I like the two different versions here on this one, really has a good visual of the two different views a good batman visual here so nice job here, the backround was pretty good too you do some really nice work and have some nice line work aswell.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more of these with other characters.

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[Spacious]

Artistic

Wow this was very artistic here you have some really nice artistic value of art here and this one shows off well so nice job here O love the lighting effects on this one some really nice results with this, anyways really love the art style here no changes here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes here on this one.

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[jin chibi]

Cute and adorble

So here was a nice and cute character here I love the expression such a great smile you have done very well, you should think about adding some detail in the backround even a simple design would be cool like some colored pateren or something anyways nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some detail in the backround even a simple design would be cool like some colored pateren or something

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[Green flutter]

Beautiful

Now this was something very delightful love the glowing and lighting effects you have here in this piece really makes it look like a night and magical moment so really nice work there, would love even more glow elements in the backround then you have, but its a nice piece

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added glow on this would be nice

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[Death Match Pong Game]

Well this was cool

So I really like this guess it was like an intro to a pong game the idea of it being a death match looks pretty cool and exciting as an art piece there is really nothing I would change up about this as it was some solid work here you do some good details here so keep it up.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes as its more of a title screen.

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1999Elias responds:

Thanks, it's the main menu screen of my game made in Python, which is based on Crash Ball, my favorite arena from Crash Bash (PS1) :D

[Cute twins]

This was cute

so this was kind of cute I love the cute expression you have on the faces and the pink kitty cat like outfit, I do think you could ad some backround detail on this one though as it was lacking some backrounds maybe even a simple backdrop on this would be cool, just something to think about.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some backround elements to spice this up a tad.

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draggle responds:

Thanks for the response. Yeah, I am recently trying to do some backgroundy stuff, but I am generally not good at it, so most of the time I either leave it out or do something super simple for it. But I'll try!