XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Onoda Sakamichi]

Very nice

So this was cool I like the detail in this like the small orb he's holding and the look on the face but the yellow background was too bright seemed like it could be a little less on the brightness of it all but regardless this was a nighty and we'll designed charchter here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Less brightness on the background

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[Maya Fey]

Wow nice

So this was a beautiful charchter you have here some nice balance of the color all though I thaught the background could have been a different color theme but overall this was a great charchter here with some nice formation of the character lines and details

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would suggest changing the background color

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[Yugo]

Cool charchter

So this was a cool looking charchter you have going on in this one some nice color use and of course a nice pose you have I like the style here very. Good work and great vibrant visual hope to see more work from you soon

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A good vibrant charchter no changes needed

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[I am the Night]

Wow nice

So this was good I like the two different versions here on this one, really has a good visual of the two different views a good batman visual here so nice job here, the backround was pretty good too you do some really nice work and have some nice line work aswell.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more of these with other characters.

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[Spacious]

Artistic

Wow this was very artistic here you have some really nice artistic value of art here and this one shows off well so nice job here O love the lighting effects on this one some really nice results with this, anyways really love the art style here no changes here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes here on this one.

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[jin chibi]

Cute and adorble

So here was a nice and cute character here I love the expression such a great smile you have done very well, you should think about adding some detail in the backround even a simple design would be cool like some colored pateren or something anyways nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some detail in the backround even a simple design would be cool like some colored pateren or something

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[Green flutter]

Beautiful

Now this was something very delightful love the glowing and lighting effects you have here in this piece really makes it look like a night and magical moment so really nice work there, would love even more glow elements in the backround then you have, but its a nice piece

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added glow on this would be nice

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[Death Match Pong Game]

Well this was cool

So I really like this guess it was like an intro to a pong game the idea of it being a death match looks pretty cool and exciting as an art piece there is really nothing I would change up about this as it was some solid work here you do some good details here so keep it up.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes as its more of a title screen.

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1999Elias responds:

Thanks, it's the main menu screen of my game made in Python, which is based on Crash Ball, my favorite arena from Crash Bash (PS1) :D

[Cute twins]

This was cute

so this was kind of cute I love the cute expression you have on the faces and the pink kitty cat like outfit, I do think you could ad some backround detail on this one though as it was lacking some backrounds maybe even a simple backdrop on this would be cool, just something to think about.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some backround elements to spice this up a tad.

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draggle responds:

Thanks for the response. Yeah, I am recently trying to do some backgroundy stuff, but I am generally not good at it, so most of the time I either leave it out or do something super simple for it. But I'll try!

[chun li]

Cute

So this was really a nice and cute character you have here, the jumping mode is nice and has some nice shine about her now the backround could really use some work here though as this was very bland but your work on the character was awsome and well detailed.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some backround work for sure

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