XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tonight we hunt Han animation]

Really nice

So this was really nice I am loving this animation here seems like if you had a sort of backround on this like some other related props to his adventure might relate better the character is amazing and the animation bounce is awsome anyways nice job here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some backround elements would be great here

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[Nobody can outrun time]

Nice

So this was really nice seems like you could have some backround in this and that gold ring would be nice with a shine and sparkle on it aswell just an idea overall this is pretty good great character design here love all the little details here and there I was really impressed with this one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A few suggestions but nothing major

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alejandroartworks responds:

Yes, at first hand this was just a doodle but some background would be good to enhance the composition and playing with some vfx its a huge awesome idea to improve the drama,Thanks dude!

[RF Ch1 Cover]

Great combo of characters here

Wow this was a nice combo of characters here and beautiful use of color here I see no need for any changes here, on an ending note I will say this was an awsome piece, I love the Skillful Talent you bring to the table, great work nice idea nice style

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I see no need for any changes here

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[Metal Gear Girl #7: Sahelanthropus]

Very cool

So this was a very nice metal gear piece sexy and shiny and you cant expect any better then that, the backround could use more to iot but you have a great character design here some very nice work here Love the detail on this I would suggest some backround detail and more shine on the gear, anyways nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would suggest some backround detail and more shine on the gear

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DashXero responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I haven't forgotten your review of TX-55 and D (all of the existing Metal Gear Girls were made at roughly the same time). If I make more of them, I'll keep that in mind.

[Game Character Design- Allegheny and Kaida]

Some nice characters

So this was some nice characters here great poses and some decent color, the backround could use a tad bit of color or details maybe a backdrop theme of sometype, anyways great work on these cute characters here it was a nice job here so make more soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the backround could use a tad bit of color or details maybe a backdrop theme of sometype

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['Game Jam at the Ruins']

Very nice

So this was very colorful here, looks like a great time here and lots of color element and some great character designs here making for all one great poster like piece here some very nice work here, I look forward to even more stuff like this one anyways nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes it was a beautiful piece

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[Taming the gigatoad]

Very nice

So this was some nice work here I love this large and in charge character you have here some really nice detail some more lighting effects might have been nice but overall this was some really nice work great detail all the way around hope you make more like this sometime soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe some more lighting effects.

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-1]

Some good action

There is a lot of suspense going on in this one you have some nice creatures and characters and there was some good suspense in this particular issue I love your comic I even started one of my own so thank you for the inspiration, anyways great comic keep up the good work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes it was pretty awsome.

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cecameron responds:

Thank you so much for all your kind comics, and good luck with your own comic!

[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-2]

A Brilliant Comic

Another great one here, wish these were a tad longer maybe a frame or row of frames longer So I found this to be a "BRILLIANT-COMIC" you have here, I like the direction this one takes and you really make some fun things happen in this one and thats what I have enjoyed about this "WEB-COMIC-ENTRY" you have presented here so really nice job on this one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
wish these were a tad longer maybe a frame or row of frames longer

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-13]

Nice Web comic

A nice web comic you have created here this is something I for sure would love to see more of as this was a "VERY-INTERESTING-COMIC" you have here, and I do look forward to much more of what you "BRING-TO-THE-PORTAL" especilly if it was anything like this entry.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes as you have some nice work here a fantastic comic here.

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