XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-2]

A Brilliant Comic

Another great one here, wish these were a tad longer maybe a frame or row of frames longer So I found this to be a "BRILLIANT-COMIC" you have here, I like the direction this one takes and you really make some fun things happen in this one and thats what I have enjoyed about this "WEB-COMIC-ENTRY" you have presented here so really nice job on this one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
wish these were a tad longer maybe a frame or row of frames longer

~X~

[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-13]

Nice Web comic

A nice web comic you have created here this is something I for sure would love to see more of as this was a "VERY-INTERESTING-COMIC" you have here, and I do look forward to much more of what you "BRING-TO-THE-PORTAL" especilly if it was anything like this entry.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes as you have some nice work here a fantastic comic here.

~X~

[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-18]

Comics Are Nifty

Very nice there was not much dialog or text bubbles this one, A nice comic vibe here with a strong buzz too, really good flow of the comic with some quality, you have a nifty comic here with some "GOOD-IDEAS-ROAMING-AROUND" on this one, So nice style here and it was unique "THIS-PARTICULAR-ONE" was really nifty and exciting.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
there was not much dialog or text bubbles this one

~X~

[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-10]

A decent Comic entry

Great visuals here your use of color and each frame just comes alive, you should possbly make some animation based off of your comics, You bring An exciting comic element full force with a A unique comic submission here and its a pleasent and delightful entry so this was a pretty nifty comic entry here lots of fine details that stand out and thats what I have enjoyed about this and hope you make more soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you should possbly make some animation based off of your comics

~X~

[Giga Bows]

Really sexy

So this was a really sexy character here love the angle shot too she looks really mad and upset so the expression was right on the backround could have more to it maybe some backdrop scene, but regardless it was a nice element and a great character design here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some backround work

~X~

[COMMISSION: Agony]

Amazing character

So this was a great character you have here I love the vibrant color of the hair wish you had pushed more of that, the backround seems like it could have a bit more shading or detail, you Ignite the fire within the art, Well I must say these are not my favorite types of art but I will say this one has grown on me with the style you have here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I love the vibrant color of the hair wish you had pushed more of that, the backround seems like it could have a bit more shading or detail

~X~

[Risky Boots Pirate Queen]

A beautiful pirate

So this was a beautiful pirate here love the purple color here it was pretty nice and was some nice visual of her in action even the backround characters was cool, I thaught the gems in her hand could have more sparkle to them, So my Insight on this whole piece is that you have Captured something differant and unique. Ok so this is where I call it an end for the review

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I thaught the gems in her hand could have more sparkle to them

~X~

[Eggs]

Nice

So this was some nice artwork here love the two cute characters here maybe some added color on this or even a sparkle off the eyes, you for sure know what you are doing and it shows, some areas could be better, but you have it down for the most part this was a nice element of art here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe some added color on this or even a sparkle off the eyes

~X~

[Konoha Tengu]

Wow

So this is some amazing work you have here the massive amount of color is pretty good you have some very deep talent and show it here so I was really impressed with all the work you have done here, so nice job on this one, would be nice if more lighting effects came through on this one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe some added lighting effects.

~X~

nightmareSyrup responds:

I'm currently practicing photographic lighting, and gwarsh it's hard to do 😂 but I'm still trying.

[SISTERS OF THE HAND]

Wow nice

And once again you amaze me with this brilliant pose by this beautiful character you have here with this combo of characters that are very vibrant in color and design I still suggest some type of background or backdrop maybe some color theme back there to accent the characters even more and that's just a suggestion it's realistic that you have already completed this beautiful piece and may not need anything major changed so really nice job here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some type of background or detail

~X~