And so after listening to it, i thought this was kind of interesting, it had a certain touch and feel to it, and i was generally pleased with the outcome, so nice job on this one. Oh this is nice, has a nice smooth feel nothing too hard here just a good soft touch to it, you do bring it up and over the edge just a tad but still has a nice "QUALITY" to it and just plays so beatifuly so nice efforts here i really enjoyed it as for improvments im not sure it needs any at all as it played out just great, this is also becoming one of my faves. And to end things here, you have presented a decent piece of audio, wich cameout pretty well, wouldnt mind hearing more from you soon and more from your works.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This had some good sound to it, i think you could do with a few adjustments so i have gone and suggested maybe one or two ideas, hope they help and they are just some basic ideas. Not much needed with this one since it did play out so nice and smooth, but i sapose if anything maybe some longer tones in there, but thats about it.