Very nice
At the start of this you had some drops or it felt like drops you should do more that throughout, So this was kind of nifty its not perfect but you have shown us an interesting sound and its kind of unique, I think you could really go deep on this one but that would take some extra additions, but I do like the path you have on this one, So good direction on this one, I chose this track because of the name and must say that was a good decision, so nice job sofar on this track.
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the start of this you had some drops or it felt like drops you should do more that throughout
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