XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[GG - 4/21: AmericanGlock]

(( ENTERTAINING ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was entertaining, the animation seemed abit short but was funny and the artwork well notbad, could be improved on maybe a few more details like in the guns and such, other then that, its nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Abit more detail with the characters starting with the guns.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining animation, abit short though.

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[Gladiation 2]

(( I LIKE IT ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very good, i like it because it has some story to it and some action, the characters could use some work though, but for the mostpart its really good, i hope you make more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make more episodes and with some character work aswell,

~~OVERALL~~
A good series with promise.

~X~

[OmFg Its GlockDay]

(( LOL ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was silly, kinda short, but it did have a certain entertaining value to it, so it did amuse me, the fwacky colors made it more entertaining, but you should add more to it like longer and more wacky scenes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer and more humor.

~~OVERALL~~
Wacky glock day lol

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[Sci vs Gua:SHORT:]

(( LOL VERY SHORT ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was over before it started heh, ill admit the soldier had a good look with good artwork, and animation of what there was but it was way to short, maybe add more to it or more short toons.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice graphics, but It was very short, so in that type of flash why not either add more content or you could make a flash with a number of short flashes like this one or even adding it as a part of some collab would be good aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Well it was fast and short but had some nice graphics.

~X~

[Dinner]

(( NOTBAD ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, it has promise, as for the lag, maybe decreaing the file size would help, the artwork on this was amazing though, i really liked it, anyways nice job, keep up the good animation work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just the size and maybe a touch up or two on some backround details.

~~OVERALL~~
A decent animation with some great artwork.

~X~

[Gangsta Courtesy]

(( NOTBAD ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i liked the animation, and i hope you got a good grade out of it all, it was decent could use more effort and more effects, nice job though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more effects. like with the backrounds and even lighting effets.

~~OVERALL~~
This was notbad for school.

~X~

[Pico & Friends!]

(( I LOVE IT ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was awsome, also random, but i still enjoyed it, it was very fast paced, but was very neat and nice work on pico, this has to be one of my faves of the pico day 06, awsome stuff here, cant wait for the next pico day.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More slower on each scene.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and good artwork.

~X~

[Naruto/Sasuke Episode one]

(( NEEDS WORK ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but could use more work especialy more effects, and maybe some more action, making it longer would be good aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effects more action are just abit of a start.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent but needs more to it.

~X~

[Gone Fishin]

(( NEEDS A STOP ACTION CODE ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a really good flash with some really nice artwork, especialy the characters, it was a fast paced animation and it was funny, the one thing i could suggest would be to add a stop action code and propper buttons, overall a decent flash if i dont say so myself.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should Add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash.

~~OVERALL~~
A very funny flash, but could use some fixing, nice work.

~X~