(( Could be improved ))
~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this one but could be improve don such as much more detail and effects, give it effects that will make it standout and really make the user go hey that was col, its notbad but needs some improving.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some flashy effects and details especialy backrunds.
~~OVERALL~~
An ok first start to a flash, but could be improved.
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