XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Goth Lyfe 2: Art Class]

(( notbad ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was notbad i like how the story plays out and it has a sense of humor aswell, as for the art the characters were notbad could use more detail though, besides that i liked it, keep making these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail with the characters.

~~OVERALL~~
A neat little goth themed animation.

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[Pok]

(( um ok ))

~~REVIEW~~
well this was abit odd, had some strange style of art and images but kinda neat, you should work on the file, its abit much.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some slight compression would be nice, as this file was pretty large, and not always fun waiting for a big download, i supose if i had a fater connection and computer it wouldnt be a problem but not everyone does have that and it kinda makes people stray away from large files such as this, so in that aspect of things, a lower filesize will help and probably get you more views to your flash

~~OVERALL~~
Needs some file compression as explained above.

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[Super Gear Solid]

(( Nice idea ))

~~REVIEW~~
i love the mixture of the two mario and solid gear, it was fun and showed some nice scenes with some decent animating, nice work on this and good effort, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the size, it was just way to big, especialy since i and many others have 56k, its a proven study that 50% of net users still use dial-up so just think about that when making a flash next time.

~~OVERALL~~
A nice theme of games, nice work on this.

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[Rantdog and the Dead]

(( lol Funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, the "CHARACTER" was different looking but he had a good "VOICE" which is probably why i liked it, and i like the backrounds it showed lots of detail and effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Take the guy into different scenes, not just the one.

~~OVERALL~~
A strange talking character, but its very funny stuff.

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[Ristar Trilogy]

(( Sharp looking sprites ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was neat, had some really nice looking sprites and very smooth aswell, im not much for this style but it was ok, nice animation and decent music aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i like it as is.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent animation with some good spritess.

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[Rhyno Rampage]

(( Short but very funy ))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, it was very short but made me laugh and with ending "TURDS" it was funny the animation had a nice style of art and good flow of animating very nice work on this one, i hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it abit longer.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and funny short.

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[T(w)oo short(s) 2]

(( Decent animations ))

~~REVIEW~~
A couple of good animation abit short though, and some decent graphics and some good effort towards both, you should work on one and make like a longer story out of it though, but i liked these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content to the animations.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent couple of animations.

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[falling man]

(( It loops ))

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda silly, i like the black and white style but you should add just abit of color, also i noticed it loops so you should try and fix that,, a stop action code should work, besides that it was entertaining

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop action code for the loopig, and some color would also be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
An entertaining animation could be improved though.

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