XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Orochimaru Hacks!]

((( NEAT FLASH )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, i kinda like it, allthough the characters could be somewhat larger for the backround and such, also think about adding more characters like a big fighting scenes and such, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Larger and more characters would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Notbad, kinda neat, the characters could be larger though...

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Kyora-Mishiso responds:

Thanks for the advice. I'll look into it.

[Boby]

((( SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was abit short, but i admit it was neat like a music video and the animation was very smooth, just seemed toos short it was just getting good then it just sorta ended, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer with more scenes and so-on...

~~OVERALL~~
Kinda like a music video, but seemed abit short...

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[(-(-( Genesis of a Clock]

((( NEAT AND ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
I liked this, it had lots going on, but the screen seemed to be abit small maybe enlarge it somehow, and you should think about addings some subtitles, as it was abit hard to understand what was being said, but i liked the animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the screen size abit larger, and add some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute clock flash lots of action in this...

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[Easter Song!]

((( NICE ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, but not only that it had some nice "ART" and very smooth animation, as for the flash it self it was cute and funny, the subtitles was was a nice touch but sometimes its hard to read as the backround blocks it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a black bar behind the text so its easier to read...

~~OVERALL~~
Smooth and funny flash and good voicing...

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[Sheep no1:Bigger than me!]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol this was cute, abit on the short side but still entertaining, maybe abit more detail on the character and backrounds, anyways cute animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more effort on backrounds and the main character...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute but short animation...

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[(old)Mega Zelby RPG 3]

((( NEAT SPRITES )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, i like the sprites and there was some really good animation. and it kept me interested. the size was abit much so maybe optimise it somehow, but for the mostpart i really liked what you did here, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bring in an all battle royal of sprites...

~~OVERALL~~
A good sprite flash with lots going on nice job...

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[Z & B, Drawn]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda looks like it was taken from a tv or something, it is neat and has a different feel to it besides other flashworks, it also loops so you may want to fix that but overall it was good...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the loop, add a stop action code or something,

~~OVERALL~~
Fun animation has a different feel to it...

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[The Mario Supreme Journey]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, made me laugh, and a smile, anyways good parody, but you should have made it longer or somewhat longer it just seemed abit shorter, anyways funny animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer and more funny humor...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny parody of SOBE, nice job...

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Fastmario responds:

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[D&M Thanksgiving short]

((( SHORT BUT FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute abit short but cute, i was not expecting all the turkey's to do that but it was funny, you could have made it longer with more scenes from what happens next, and i think some "SUBTITLES" would make this abit better, anyways funny short...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some more scenes and some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and short, but very funny and cute...

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