XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[(-(-( Genesis of a Clock]

((( NEAT AND ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
I liked this, it had lots going on, but the screen seemed to be abit small maybe enlarge it somehow, and you should think about addings some subtitles, as it was abit hard to understand what was being said, but i liked the animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the screen size abit larger, and add some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute clock flash lots of action in this...

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[Easter Song!]

((( NICE ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, but not only that it had some nice "ART" and very smooth animation, as for the flash it self it was cute and funny, the subtitles was was a nice touch but sometimes its hard to read as the backround blocks it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a black bar behind the text so its easier to read...

~~OVERALL~~
Smooth and funny flash and good voicing...

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[Sheep no1:Bigger than me!]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol this was cute, abit on the short side but still entertaining, maybe abit more detail on the character and backrounds, anyways cute animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more effort on backrounds and the main character...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute but short animation...

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[(old)Mega Zelby RPG 3]

((( NEAT SPRITES )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, i like the sprites and there was some really good animation. and it kept me interested. the size was abit much so maybe optimise it somehow, but for the mostpart i really liked what you did here, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bring in an all battle royal of sprites...

~~OVERALL~~
A good sprite flash with lots going on nice job...

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[Z & B, Drawn]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda looks like it was taken from a tv or something, it is neat and has a different feel to it besides other flashworks, it also loops so you may want to fix that but overall it was good...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the loop, add a stop action code or something,

~~OVERALL~~
Fun animation has a different feel to it...

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[The Mario Supreme Journey]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, made me laugh, and a smile, anyways good parody, but you should have made it longer or somewhat longer it just seemed abit shorter, anyways funny animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer and more funny humor...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny parody of SOBE, nice job...

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Fastmario responds:

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[D&M Thanksgiving short]

((( SHORT BUT FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute abit short but cute, i was not expecting all the turkey's to do that but it was funny, you could have made it longer with more scenes from what happens next, and i think some "SUBTITLES" would make this abit better, anyways funny short...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some more scenes and some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and short, but very funny and cute...

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[RJ - Shorts 2]

((( HA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was well put together with some interesting characters and i must say the voices were notbad either and fitting to the characters, really nice job on the characters and the flash very funny and original, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of this like in aseries or something...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining animation with interesting characters...

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[Time Squad [Part 2]]

(( Awsome ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was some awsome animation,, i was not fond of the huge file but from the start it had great animation, decent humor and great characters very nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some file compression.

~~OVERALL~~
A huge file but very awsome stuff.

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The-Swain responds:

I compressed the movie when I split it into two parts :D