XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Untitled Flash]

Nice video

~~REVIEW~~
This was good, allthough it lacked in backrounds, the whitebackrounds were just abit bland, but you had a nice song and good flow of animation, so nice work on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backrounds would be where i would start

~~OVERALL~~
Good video nice animation.

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[God is French: Genesis 1]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Well that was interesting, i do however like your choice in music, also you need to add a Stop action code into your flash it will stop the flash from looping. anyways it was a funny flash, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash ofcourse you will also need to add a replay and or play buttons at the start and end of your animation

~~OVERALL~~
needs some work but its alright

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[Fall 4]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
LOL ok well that was one amusinig animation and very short, you should also think about adding a replay button at the end of the film, but mostly this needs more content

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content aswell as a replay button

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining short animation

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[The Smoking Kills Collab]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
These were notbad, some better then others and some with decent quality, the one thing i had a problem with was the size thats abit large, for some not me it may take forever to load, anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and reduce the size somewhat

~~OVERALL~~
Nice number of shorts

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[D a r k A l l e y]

Lol lomg credits

~~REVIEW~~
ok well its not a bad flash, the credits were kinda long, but as for the flash itself it was good and you showed off some good effects, you should make some more episodes i like your style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make these longer

~~OVERALL~~
Slice and dice

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[The Voyage Part 1]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was entertaining and made me chuckle somewhat, the language was abut much, and you should try and lower the filesize abit it was also abit much, other then that it was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Filesize was abit much, flashworks of this size tend to take abit longer and probably scare some people away so just some advice on lowering it will bring more potential viewrs to your works.

~~OVERALL~~
Large but somewhat entertaining

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[Terrance and Phillip]

Very short

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well that one was very short, i would suggest abit more content and possbly some more characters, might even make an improvmentm anyways nice short

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content

~~OVERALL~~
Vert short short

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[Reptiles Rampage]

Snowman haha

~~REVIEW~~
Haha the sbowman was funny, made me laugh, as for the fights it was cool and had some nice effects, these fights are cool though so nice flash here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make then slightly longer, and more funny stuff

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining fights here

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[Corn The WonderVeggie]

LOL Ok

~~REVIEW~~
Lol ok this one was odd, Entertaining yes but still odd a killer corn hehe notbad of an idea, the animation was decent, and it wasa ctually a funny story so notbad on this one, i look forward to your future works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like it as is

~~OVERALL~~
Random killer corn

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[Jayne's Anger]

LOL Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this one made me laugh, it was abit hard to understand the voices so you should think about adding some "SUBTITLES" it would greatly help others to understand this aswell, other then that it was entertaining

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
funny but hard to understand

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