XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[From sketch to finish]

Nice work

~~REVIEW~~
nice sketchwork it was a nice liitle animation, i wouldnt mind seeing the animation move abit faster though. other then that it was ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed up the animation just abit

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining

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[~~~~~~men With Arms~~~~~~]

Abit large in file

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was an ok flash but my main concern was the size of it below, you may want to reduce it from the large 5 megs, other then that it was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and reduce the size of the file so that it doesnt take forever to load up, and probably will allow more users to view it since it wont be so long to download

~~OVERALL~~
Abit large of a file

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[DP - Last Cookie 2]

Cool another

~~REVIEW~~
ok cool this was better, still wouldnt have minded some effects like blood from a gunshot, but sofar you have some good entertaining video here, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more efects

~~OVERALL~~
another entertaining video

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[404: You fail]

Haha funny

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was funny, and nice work with your character, and backround, it all came together and was funny and amuing, i really liked this one, so nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like it as is

~~OVERALL~~
Funny animation

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Lochie responds:

Thank you sir, you made my day. :D

[Tequila & Schnapps]

strange one

~~REVIEW~~
Well this one was abit strange, kinda short and could use some improving, the idea could use more humor, and more effects overall, also needs more characters to make it a much improved animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters and more humor

~~OVERALL~~
Clocks and strangeness

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[Gaive remix]

Add some backrounds

~~REVIEW~~
Simple and entertaining, but needs some improving i would start with more refined characters not so thick in lines, and add some backrunds, that would be a start, i did like this animation though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above some new characters and backrounds would be the place to start

~~OVERALL~~
Simple and entertaining

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[Dante's Inferno (Rated G)]

This was cute

~~REVIEW~~
A cute animation with some cute art, i wouldnt mind getting some voices from these characters i really like the smooth flow of animation, the aniamtion did go by fast aswell, but overall it was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more interaction from the characters

~~OVERALL~~
Cute and funny animation

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[skateing stick]

Cool skater

~~REVIEW~~
cool skater flash, it could be abit longer, but it was ok, just seems to lack more content and more stuff going on but sofar its notbad. keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content and longer flash

~~OVERALL~~
A skater flash abit on the short side

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[Familyguyfan ep.2 p.4]

Could use some subtitles

~~REVIEW~~
Hehe this was funny, allthough it could use some subtitles for the voices, but i liked it and was entertaining and had good humor so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
pokemon parody

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[The Jesus Christ Show 2]

Needs some work

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, but could use some work such as some "SUBTITLES" aswell as a play and replay button and a stopaction code so it doesnt loop over and over, and you may want to make the animation smoother, it seemed abit choppy.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A stop action code, smoother animation and subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
Funny idea but needs work

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