XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Familyguyfan ep.2 p.4]

Could use some subtitles

~~REVIEW~~
Hehe this was funny, allthough it could use some subtitles for the voices, but i liked it and was entertaining and had good humor so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
pokemon parody

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[The Jesus Christ Show 2]

Needs some work

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, but could use some work such as some "SUBTITLES" aswell as a play and replay button and a stopaction code so it doesnt loop over and over, and you may want to make the animation smoother, it seemed abit choppy.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A stop action code, smoother animation and subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
Funny idea but needs work

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[If at First...]

Very welldone

~~REVIEW~~
Well im impressed, this was a welldone idea, and the black and white style was nice, but a tad bit of color could make it much better, a very smooth animation with a great idea behind it so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a bit of color here and there even if its some blood, his eyes or something

~~OVERALL~~
Great idea for a flash

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[Hammer Smash Face Remake]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Well not much to, review on this but what i did see, it was ok, could use more animation, and more content most of all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining

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[Name Switch]

hehe

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, allthough the backrounds were lacking somewhat, you should add to the backrounds with some flash effects or something, other then that it was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some special effects and backround work is needed

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining

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CodeRedClock responds:

thanks for the fair review

[DP - Last Cookie]

Haha cool

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad the action looked real so good on your part for making it look that way, i wouldnt mind seeing more to this like a series, but for what it was it was notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some special effects like blood after some puches

~~OVERALL~~
Funny realtime video

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AntiWork responds:

Thank you for your thoughts!

[makin a pizza]

LOL Funny

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was a very fast animation but it was funny, the smooth colors and fast animation worked well along with some interesting charcters, it was well scripted very nice indeed, keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like it as is

~~OVERALL~~
Fast and smooth animation

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[Bob the Atog]

Lol funny

~~REVIEW~~
Haha well this was funny, i wouldnt mind seeing some improving such as make the actual characters from the cards, you should make one of POXNORA its slightly better then mtg in my opinion, it would be neat.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the characters comeout of the cards

~~OVERALL~~
Fun MTG parody

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[Blue Guy Meets The Fly]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad this was entertaining and i like what you did here with the character and the animation was kinda smooth, the filn does just start playing then looping might want to look into that

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the loop and add play/replay buttons

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and cute

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GeneralHargreaves responds:

Hey thanks for the review, I always welcome that kinda feedback :)
Unfortunately however, I can't fix the loop and I can't add play buttons cos I don't use flash :\
I'm definitely thinking about investing in it though after seeing some of the work on here
- Thanks again :)

[A very SRM birthday]

Cute characters

~~REVIEW~~
Cute characters and funny amusing flash. i like your character work but maybe they could use a more detailed aproach,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and effects

~~OVERALL~~
Cute flash

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Battosai810 responds:

Well, the details and effects get better with each cartoon - I'm honestly curious how you found this flash without seeing one of my newer ones, like one from the past year and a half.
Anyway, thanks for reviewing an old chestnut. Don't get much traffic on these old flashes!