XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SHS: reel 2]

Very welldone here

~~REVIEW~~
Very welldone here, great characters love the dark feel and the awsome backrounds, a good story with even abit of humor i liked it so nice job on this flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some backround effects a sparkle in the moon a flying bird or two

~~OVERALL~~
Great movie with lots of effort nice work indeed.

~X~

[Kingdom Bites]

I liked it

~~REVIEW~~
almost seems right out of a show or something and why is there no sound? or even subtitles? that may be something you need to work on. you also need a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will stop the looping

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop action code, some sound and subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
Decent but needs work

~X~

[GMP]

Welcome to newgrounds

~~REVIEW~~
Well its notbad for your first on here, you seem to know your way around the flash program, as for this i would like to see more animation and more backround work, you have the characters down but it needs more, anywasy welcome to newgrounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation

~~OVERALL~~
Decent for a first time

~X~

[Get a sense of humor.]

Haha ok funny

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok when i saw this it was already in the middle and he was pointing at well ya know, i did get a laugh out of this, but what this flash tells me is that you need a stop-action-code.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my only issue with this one would be that it would "LOOP" over and over and you could fix that easily with an action script code >> Stop-Action-Code. checkout tutorials on the newground forums if you are unsure how to do a Stop-Action-Code

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining

~X~

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 6]

Haha notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was notbad the "CHARCTERS" were odd looking but they also made it somewhat unique and funn, the story was funny and made me laugh, so nice work on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters like these would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
Funny story and odd characters

~X~

Jimtopia responds:

Looks like I've already solved the "things to improve on" section, there ARE more characters like this in my arsenal! Expect to see them all soon.

[Dragonball Z Episode 2]

Good story here

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was decent had a good story about it, and the artwork from the backrounds to the characters was good aswell, the animation could be abit smoother but i liked it for what it was.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animating

~~OVERALL~~
Decent action and good flash

~X~

[Even Timmins Re-Extended]

It was ok

~~REVIEW~~
It was ok, i thought it could be compressed abit better, it was not bad but is starting to get up there but ot was an ok flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some compression would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining flash

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