XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Indiania Flour Sack]

Decent but needs more

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad the animation itself seemed ok but might be improved with some music and or sound/fx, its a good little animation though, i look forward to your future works

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add sond/fx and or music, you can even try something from the audio portal

~~OVERALL~~
Nice animation but needs work

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[Noir Madness.]

Haha cool

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cool especially the intro, it really themed like madness, love the touch of color added, anyways nice entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing its good as is

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash here make more soon

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Tager responds:

Thanks alot :D

[Madness Aggravation]

Nice detail you have here

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice detail you have here with backrounds, also noticed the nice and smooth animation, i wouldnt mind seeings some flashy effects with that though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some flashy effects like more detail and possibly some "ALPHA" effect in stuff

~~OVERALL~~
Anyways nice madness with good detail

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SilenzXE responds:

Just so you know... I didn't make any of this stuff. I am making my own sprites atm, but these aren't it.

Thanks for the review! :D

[haiku project]

This was entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
This was a cute and entertaining flash i love the character shows you have good detail, you could detail the backround abit better, maybe with some flying birds or something to make it look abit more real.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround details would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash cute and funny, nice work

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icetray111 responds:

yeah i know. This was a rushed a project. I didnt like doing it either which is why i rushed to get it done and plus I ran out of time cause i procrastinated :P.

But thanx for the review man. i could use some constructive critism.

[Too horny!]

Cute flash

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was really cute especially the character, i thought the text above the head would have been better if it was at the bottom on some sorta scroll bar but thats just me, nice flash in anycase

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a scroll bar at bottom for the text

~~OVERALL~~
Decent and cute flash you have here

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Kaytee responds:

It's not meant to be cute >:3

But thanks for the review anyway :)

[Glycolysis]

Educational

~~REVIEW~~
Well it does teach some that was the good part, the "AUDIO" was abit scratchy so possibly a better quality mic or music instead

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A better mic

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash

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[Goat Runner]

Cute flash

~~REVIEW~~
This was a cute flash but i found it entertaining, the "MUSIC" was really good it really made this flash even better, anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the screenview abit larger

~~OVERALL~~
Cute animation better music

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Graeme responds:

Choosing music is difficult. I wish I could have found something maybe a little more suiting. But nothing had exactly the feel I was going for.

And, I was wondering about the screen view too. I didn't want the goat to be too big. Nor did I want more than just a handful of frames on screen at once.
I suppose I could have tinkered with it a bit more though.

Thanks for the helpful tips

[Audio Portal 7]

I remember this

~~REVIEW~~
I remember this and you :(, as for the flash it will live on and you presented the audio which is always nice, so nice job on these

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well it is what it is

~~OVERALL~~
Goos support for the audio portal

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[Fast Food 2008]

Cute flash

~~REVIEW~~
Cute flash you have here especially with the "FROG" i wouldnt mind seeing some more movment from the from eyes and such, anyways other then that it was cool.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation in the frog

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining frog

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worldofpeach responds:

Thanks for your comments and suggestions