XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic Short: Tails Doll?]

Very short

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this very short animation, its a good start but needs some improving like making it longer and some subtitles wouldnt hurt, i like the character work though just make this a longer episode somegow.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles, and add more content

~~OVERALL~~
Silly and short animation

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[Constipation]

Haha Funny

~~REVIEW~~
Well presented and just like a movie trailer, some parts did seem abit disturbing but i was entertained hehe anyways it was entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more backrounds color and effects to start

~~OVERALL~~
A trailer of a new movie you will love it

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[Sonics Boner Quest 4]

Abit large in filesize

~~REVIEW~~
the animation was notbad, my main issue with this was the big file, possibly slowing it down for others you

may get more viewers if it wasent as big, but for the most part it was a good flash

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Size reduction is recremended

~~OVERALL~~
Big file but very good animation

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[The Real Solution]

Funny

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad it was funny and gave me a laugh or two, only thing i had issues was, the 4.5 megs this was and only

worry that it may limit some users from enjoying your work, just something to think about when making big

file flashworks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Reduce the file size somewhat

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and good quality

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[Chinese dancing trap]

LOL Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Lol ok another odd and random flash here, silly yes and entertaining, you should add some backrounds though

the white one is abit bland, other then that it was notbad, keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some colored backrounds

~~OVERALL~~
Silly and random

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[LL - Garlic's Lock Day]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad this one was ok, i did however think the scenes went by abit slow, so you may want to smoothout the

animation abit and more comunication among the characters aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More cominication and, faster scenes

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining lock flash

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[Dante vs Cloud]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was cool, i especially like the option of choosing awinner, you could add a few extra effects in

the backround for extra measure though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra effects would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
Short flash with some nice options

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