XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Battle::Remade]

Interesting style

~~REVIEW~~
This had an interesting style like the bottom text bar with some nice effects aswell, the sticks were abit

plain and could use some more detail but overall i was generally pleased with it so nice work and

entertaining

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more details on the stick fighters

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting style of sticks at battle

[Randomness Fight]

Could be reduced in size

~~REVIEW~~
Well first off i would suggest reducing the size of the flash as it was abit larger and will turn alot of

56k users away so thats a start, it was interesting though just needs abit of file reduction

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
File reduction

~~OVERALL~~
Big file but still decent work and this artist is getting better

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[moneyrun]

This was very good

~~REVIEW~~
haha the graphics were simple but you presented a good idea and concept which made me laugh and really enjoy

it, improved graphics would only improve on this one, anyways nice job indeed. i will add this to my faves

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some imprived details in character and some shading in backrounds wouldnt hurt

~~OVERALL~~
Awsome idea very funny

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[Brendon & Gerrard Show 01]

Um ok

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on the characters, but the voices could use some re-working, it was abit scratchy, and it had some

random image moments which was silly, but overall i thought it was ok, but can be improved

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better quality of voices could be used

~~OVERALL~~
Another silly flash

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[Music Video]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well that was notbad, the black and white style is cool, some added color just here and there would spice it

up, but overall its a good little video, maybe even making the screen abit larger would be nice aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the screen abit larger and add some color here and there

~~OVERALL~~
Good music video

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[Wicked Twist (old)]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Interesting animation, the music was a nice tough, but it seems to droput halfway through the animation,

your character was also ok but could use some fine details, other then that it was notbad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less thicker lines on the outline of the character can be a start

~~OVERALL~~
Good start but needs improving

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mightclark responds:

Thank you for your Review XwaynecoltX, i appreciate your tips, and thoughts on this animation. I've recently been working on improving my artwork skills, and I'm currently remaking this series with the same general ideas. I hope to see your comments and ideas for the remade version.

[Clock Crew's Final End !]

Notbad for a clock flash

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad on this one i liked seeing the old clocks in there, i wouldnt mind understanding the clocks abit

more though, other then that it was a funny episode

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
Clocks of the old

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