XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Maniac Mansion]

Really funny

This was very funny, the music was nifty and seemed to be just right, nice work overall on this it was entertaining

Funny flash and good music here

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[Chicken Choker]

kinda short

This was kinda short and could use some fine details here and there, so some more effort on the main idea is needed

needs more effort

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[ranran stole chocolates]

Haha interesting

~~REVIEW~~
haha well that was interesting, crazy and abit random but it gave me a laugh or two while the characters were not all that great they still added some humor to the flash

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make the screen bigger and maybe add some more scenes besides just the one you got going there

~~OVERALL~~
funny and random, good for a few laughs

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[Science is Phun 1]

OK that was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
The animation was ok, but the idea was disturbing at times but you did do well on this so nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More stuff like this animation would be cool

~~OVERALL~~
odd but cool

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CyanideBreathmint responds:

Thanks for the review. I only threw this together in about 2 hours in the wee hours while I couldn't sleep. It will get better.

[TF2 Sniper Artwork]

This was cool

~~REVIEW~~
Ok this was kinda neat actually and for this piece i think the music really flowed with the animation so nice choice of music, keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
try and speed up the animation just slightly

~~OVERALL~~
A drawing piece with some good backround music

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HardyMonster responds:

thanks that's really nice, and i cant believe i've got such good comments for my first proper flash!! thanks :D

[Crazy monsters 3]

entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was entertaining, i had fun watching this one and your other one, they were kinda random which was neat, you should keep making these i find them very entertaining

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more as suggested above

~~OVERALL~~
A funny episode in the new series of monsters

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[Crazy monsters 4]

Lower the sound abit

~~REVIEW~~
Lol ok that was amusing, the sound of the game fighting scene gets abit much at times so try and lower the sound there but for the mostpart it was ok

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower sound so it doesnt get so scratchy

~~OVERALL~~
Funny little animation notbad stuff though

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[Watchpoop]

Lol amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Lol that was entertaining, it was ok though good effort on adding the voices in and the toon itself was notbad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some subtitles would help

~~OVERALL~~
A short yet funny tune

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