XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[haiku project]

This was entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
This was a cute and entertaining flash i love the character shows you have good detail, you could detail the backround abit better, maybe with some flying birds or something to make it look abit more real.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround details would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash cute and funny, nice work

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icetray111 responds:

yeah i know. This was a rushed a project. I didnt like doing it either which is why i rushed to get it done and plus I ran out of time cause i procrastinated :P.

But thanx for the review man. i could use some constructive critism.

[Too horny!]

Cute flash

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was really cute especially the character, i thought the text above the head would have been better if it was at the bottom on some sorta scroll bar but thats just me, nice flash in anycase

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a scroll bar at bottom for the text

~~OVERALL~~
Decent and cute flash you have here

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Kaytee responds:

It's not meant to be cute >:3

But thanks for the review anyway :)

[Glycolysis]

Educational

~~REVIEW~~
Well it does teach some that was the good part, the "AUDIO" was abit scratchy so possibly a better quality mic or music instead

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A better mic

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash

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[Goat Runner]

Cute flash

~~REVIEW~~
This was a cute flash but i found it entertaining, the "MUSIC" was really good it really made this flash even better, anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the screenview abit larger

~~OVERALL~~
Cute animation better music

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Graeme responds:

Choosing music is difficult. I wish I could have found something maybe a little more suiting. But nothing had exactly the feel I was going for.

And, I was wondering about the screen view too. I didn't want the goat to be too big. Nor did I want more than just a handful of frames on screen at once.
I suppose I could have tinkered with it a bit more though.

Thanks for the helpful tips

[Audio Portal 7]

I remember this

~~REVIEW~~
I remember this and you :(, as for the flash it will live on and you presented the audio which is always nice, so nice job on these

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well it is what it is

~~OVERALL~~
Goos support for the audio portal

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[Fast Food 2008]

Cute flash

~~REVIEW~~
Cute flash you have here especially with the "FROG" i wouldnt mind seeing some more movment from the from eyes and such, anyways other then that it was cool.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation in the frog

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining frog

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worldofpeach responds:

Thanks for your comments and suggestions

[Mr. Mad]

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute, very entertaining, you could improve on this though, such as possibly some "SUBTITLES" and maybe abit more "COLOR" other then that you gave this film some good humor and such so nice job there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Subtitles and more color

~~OVERALL~~
Funny humor on this one

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[Madness Hitman P1]

Notbad could be improved

~~REVIEW~~
nice characters and good fast animation here, i like your eye for detail on these, i would have text at the bottom instead of over the guys head but thats just my opinion, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better font for text and place it at the bottom of the screen like subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
Decent and good detail in this one

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[Teleporter Stick]

Wow nice button effects

~~REVIEW~~
This was cool because of the options at the start with the buttons and such made for an overall better flash, also liked the choice of music, was that a mario sound? anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more pre-options

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash even better options

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luksfarris responds:

Thank you for the review =]

[[kiwishort] sonic mess up]

Haha cute nice work

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i liked this it had some good music that seemed to fit with sonic themed flash and games, the ending was the best part, i wouldnt mind having seen more detail in the bump though, but other then that i liked this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more detail in the ending scene

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and cute i liked it

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thekiwi responds:

best review til now (: thanks