XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Future Vision]

Nice idea

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was a nice idea, good car theme here and even some better features, kinda simple though, ad some action somehow

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more, i was bland and needs more action scenes and such

~~OVERALL~~
Good idea but needs more

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[a little head!]

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
Heh this was a cue flash, the characters were abit odd but thats what i liked about it, i was not too fond of the backrounds they need more depth and detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
and some deail in the sky and ground in the backround to make it look more like a sky and ground

~~OVERALL~~
Funny characters, decent film

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[10 Sec Max - The Concept!]

Haha funny

~~REVIEW~~
Haha well that was some amazing funny, the film seemed abit on the shortside but the ending was great hehe

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it abit better maybe a few more funny scenes and such

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and short but good for a laugh

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[PRELOADER HELP CLICK]

A good tutorial

~~REVIEW~~
I thought this was a good tut, could use abit more color but it was still good and seems helpful, nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color

~~OVERALL~~
A good helpfull tutorial

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[Stick Dudes: Walk in Park]

Entertaining but needs more

~~REVIEW~~
The stick characters were ok but maybe make better characters next time, i liked it though, some advice i left belore, hope it helps

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Remove the buttons, the whole Click next button seemed to get repetitive so i suggest you remove the buttons and just allow it to play as a movie instead it will have a much better result, the click next button just tends to anoy people when all they want to do is watch a movie.

~~OVERALL~~
funny start but could use some improvments

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[YOU NAME IT!]

Haha short but funny

~~REVIEW~~
Haha im giving this one a 6 it was funny, very short though, maybe add a few more in compileation, anyways funny stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well it was good, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but needs more like i stated above

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[Javacke storyboards part1]

Kinda funny

~~REVIEW~~
Hhehe well it was kinda funny as i stated above, i did think you the artist could have worked on some featured to improve it, like i wouldnt mind some subtitles of some sort, not that it was bad or anything just that its a nice feature, anyways nice flash in anycase

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Subtiles as i stated above

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash i rather enjoyed myself with it, hope to see more of your work in the coming future

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JonSock responds:

ya ill start to get better sooner or later

[Sponsor a starving child]

Made me chuckle

~~REVIEW~~
haha well it did make me chickle abit, kinda funny, i thought you could have added more scenes and just more characters to give it some more humor.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more stuff, like i pointed out above

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but needs more

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[Lum the Fat]

It was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
This was interestting, i like the design, i did however think the loading bar could be re done o better fit the film though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
New loading bar

~~OVERALL~~
Awsome idea here

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[The Double Yolker]

enteryaining

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was cute, i like the "CIRCLE" view of it and on top of that it was funny made me laugh, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more color seemed abit bland at times

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and nice idea

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