XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Quick Flash Animation 1]

simple but i liked it

~~REVIEW~~
kinda short and it loops you may want to fix the looping, the animation was actually ok its just that it was too short.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it longer and add much more to it and possibly fix the looping with a stop action code

~~OVERALL~~
Short but cute

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bernie-buddy responds:

The looping was done on purpose.

[Heil's New Grounds]

silly

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was sorta silly, kinda entertaining but still ok seems like it could use more, even if you are using just jpegs add more and more differant backrounds and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more scenes, and more other jpegs and such

~~OVERALL~~
Silly but i found it entertaining

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Heil responds:

okay

[Furios fighting]

very nice graphics

~~REVIEW~~
very nice work here great animating awsome blood effects good sounds, and good kills i really liked this i hope you make more like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make em longer and more crazy

~~OVERALL~~
Decent action and nice effects

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ZayanuZaroc responds:

Thanks for the review, it sure helped :)
I might do something similar again but not until next year I think...
Will try to do some more original stuff first.
Might change the plans though...

[crepas]

make an english version

~~REVIEW~~
this was actually pretty good animation was nice and smooth, voice was very clear, maybe make an english version though,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add an english version and or make english subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
Good and smooth animation

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cAtyviri responds:

thank you! i dont think i will make an english version of it, but i'll make new animations, now with subtitles haha, thanks for the comment :3!

[session o' sk8]

notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was notbad, kinda neat infact i like the characters but they still could be spiced up somewhat, this animation could be a tad longer aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it longer and add more detail to your characters

~~OVERALL~~
A decent skate flash

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blind-donkey responds:

Im glad you enjoyed it

[The Fat Ass Elbow]

needs more lots more

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny but you need more then that lots more stuff, more southpark characters more content lots more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more stuff as stated as above

~~OVERALL~~
Kartman strikes again

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[Samurai Jack:Trailer]

needs work

~~REVIEW~~
this was so-so the art style was not half bad but you still need other areas of improvment,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more detail all around front and backrounds

~~OVERALL~~
Decent

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[.my intro]

hmmmm

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm well it was just an intro, could use more content and some animation besides just the intro but its your first flash so its ok

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more then just the intro

~~OVERALL~~
just an intro

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