XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Audio Mix 004]

I like these

~~REVIEW~~
I like what you have done here you have a good idea, it just needs to be presented more, like i have stated that the larger view screen is needed, and the faster animations aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like in all the other ones faster and smoother animations, and a more larger "VIEW SCREEN"

~~OVERALL~~
A good attempt at a flash music player

~X~

LadyJava responds:

Thanks...

[The first attempt]

Too short

~~REVIEW~~
Seems like its too short, and this was lacking some color, you should add more to it more characters more scenes but most of all add some color from backrounds to the characters, it was just lacking in those areas

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well color for one, and the loop was so short so add much more stuff going on scenes more story, and color

~~OVERALL~~
Too short

~X~

Alakamame responds:

I'm working on it

[Such a lovely day!]

kinda trippy

~~REVIEW~~
That was kinda trippy i thought, the "MUSIC" was interesting and gave it that extra trippy feel, it was slow and seemed like it could be better from some more speedier animation, but i liked it none the less

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
speed up animation add more strange happenings like the trees outa no-where

~~OVERALL~~
Trippy but enlightning

~X~

[Uzbekistan]

notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad the characters are decent the story is actually notbad and it has some decent humor fro did a good job i thought lol, but from what you have here i thought it was a decently made and mildly entertaining, so nice job all around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add abit more humor in there it was ok but could use some more

~~OVERALL~~
A decent story and somewhat funny but needs more

~X~

MonoFlauta responds:

"Add abit more humor in there it was ok but could use some more"

Yeah at the beggining is not good, but later is awesome :P you need to accept that lol

Thanks for reviewing!

[MonKKey Chapter 2]

notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad at all i thought the "STORY" was the best part you really put time in it and the effects also really showed very well like the blood scenes, i had a funtime watching this you should make more of it maybe like a continuing story of some sort

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add abit more glitter and glowing effects in the backround effects it might give it that special edge

~~OVERALL~~
Good story nice effects

~X~

AM-Frasier responds:

Thx I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will indeed be making more. Pass it on !!!

[How to Catch a Hippo]

Haha cute

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was a cute flash along with a neat idea seemed to work hand and hand, the backround was abit "BLAND" something to fix later, and i thought the entire flash could use some subtitles, but with all that said i was pleased with the entertaining outcome, nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color or backdrops to the backrounds, and some subtitles would be a nice add on for this film

~~OVERALL~~
Good funny flash here

~X~

Matija27 responds:

I thought that it would look better without background. Maybe next time, hehe.
I was thinking about subtitles too. Maybe I will add them later.

Thanks for the constructive review :)