XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Elder Scrolls Adventures]

Smooth and entertaining

OK so with this one i was not familuar with some of the content, but for what was shown it did show some good "EFFORT" and had some good style to it aswell as bringing good "QUALITY" to it so that was a plus, I like the dragon at the end though that was pretty neat, now one thing that concerned me and maybe it could be worked on was the size maybe it could be cut somehow so the file size wasent so large, only suggest that so that its an easier load time for viewers, But overall this this was a fun flash even the music was entertaining, but anyways keep up the fantastic work, i found this one to be entertaining even with a larger file size, untill next time good luck on whatever you have comming up next for us.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So the onlything here was the filesize of 7 mb while in todays age you see more and more of that it could still be reduced, I try and tell people how to reduce or why, Try and reduce the size of the file so that it doesnt take forever to load up, and probably will allow more users to view it since it wont be so long to download.

[Double Dragon DragonsTale]

Love it

First off good flash here, you made it very entertaining and it was alot better then i originally expected, The "SIE" was massivly huge, but i guess you needed alot to it, it does look like alot of high quality and that shows, the art was notbad, and the animation was actually alot better then expected like i said before, but i really like how this moves fast and flowed well with all the art and animation so i was pretty pleased with everything going on, so nice efforts all around, Voices were really good and things again flowed well as i mentioned, So as for improvment I dont kknow other then cutting down the file size somehow, but other then that this was pretty good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Entertaining flash kind of large in size maybe it could be cut into 2 epsiodes or something.

kalabor106 responds:

Yeah the MP4 sizes are a bit big this project was so huge that flash crashed about 80% through the publishing that MP4 was the greatest thing to happen. I'll have to mess around with some of the compressions thou on my next projects and see if I can cut down the size with very little lose to the graphics. Glad you like this :)

[Maximum Happiness]

This was pretty decent work

and as i get started on this submission entry, i found it entertaining it even gets better as it plays thru and such, Now while its just the start of things i think you really have something here, so keep going with that. But I like the creativity in this with the large creature causing havoc everywhere and so on, it was pretty amusing and gave me a few laughs here and there, the "VISUALS" were pretty fantastic i was just amazed at how everything was happening and you really pushed the effort here and thats what i really liked about it, So what else can you say about this, its amusing and entertaining and had some nice visual graphics so from start to the end it was pretty good entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so this is where I suggest a few ideas on the good and bad points hoping to find and give some good points that can generally make this a lil better, but if not it was a decent flash in anycase. As for this submission i didnt really find much or anything at all, it was a pretty decent entry and is a stand alone submission, so at this point i would just say great job and hope to see more from you soon.

Brewster responds:

Thanks! I appreciate the review.

[The Godfather pt. IV]

Entertaining, kind of short

Hmmm well first of all that was kind of short,it starts off great though with the music from the movie, and all the the shooting that was kinda funny and amusing, just wish you had put more into this, like some animation, more story, and overall just more depth to it all, also some better "BUTTON" effort is needed aswell, as the button you had to start over was hard to click on so adding more of an hit area for the button instead of just the text would make the button not so hard to click on, making a box around it and making all that a hit area would be a plus. But other then that this was funny and amusing kind of short but still amusing, Anyways hope to see some upgrades and changes on this, Untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Too short needs to be longer, amybe add some animation with characters, The "START" button could use some better "HIT-AREA" as the button was kind of hard to clcik on.

[TheTruth.com Parody]

Ok that was really short

So that was really short, very very short, So add more too it, i mean i didnt really understand alot of it because it was so fast over as soon as it started, but it did have some effort as it had some nice visuals and sound, the "GREEN" text at the bottom could be changed to a differant color as the green is hard to see with the backround visuals. That was the basic of it, its interesting but could be longer, and abit more effort aswell, So while i liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, i went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good flash. anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some improvments that could be made, here are a few suggestions, some effort on your side will only make this even better. So give these options a try, Another thing i noticed was that this was just way too short, and you have a few options here, add more to your flash, more scenes more info, more content, and or add this along with other short flashes all in one flash so that there is abit more depth to the whole flash.the green text at the bottom could be changed to a differant color as the green is hard to see with the backround visuals.

[Super Happy Fun Time 33]

It was decent

Now there was not much to this one but it was pretty interesting with your design and all, kinda neat and unique, So while the animation itself was not all that great but you had a nice design in here as mentioned, you could spice things up abit more though maybe improved backrounds of some sort, maybe some deeper depth of color and designs aswell, just an idea though on something to improve, Now dont get me wrong this was kinda interestings just needed something more though, more stuff going on and such, but for the most of it i did enjoy what you did present us, 5 mb was starting to get long but was not that bad in this case, so anyways nice job all around, i look forward to seeing more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there could be some small improvments, start with the backround design, maybe some more animation, and last but ot least could be cut down in size just a tad.

[Deciduous]

Good flash here

First off glad to see this movie was so popular winning a few awards, pretty nifty if you ask me. This was pretty good, i really like how this story played out, The character is pretty interesting, and was odd, but still neat, you pushed more of the visuals then the story but it all worked hand and hand, and actually madeout for a good flash here, Dont know much about the character, but it was a good character and kept me wanting more as things played out, And with the "MUSIC" it fit so well and made everything flow very well and smooth, Its kind of like a story about life and stuff and you presented that perfectly, The piano playing was very nice, so props to you on that and a very good flash i look forward to more stuff,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now this was already great, could use more back story for the character but it was still pretty good if you ask me.

[COMET]

Nice and christmas like

Great job on making this to daily feature thats a great award on anything always shows the effort you been through on something like this, This had alot of wondering and mystery around it i like how you presnted that feel, and touch there, The whole idea for chirstmas was great and you really presented that christmas feely touch style, And i love how everything is very colorful in this, really made the animation more enjoyble, The onlything i was concerned about was probably the size on this 12 mb was pretty big and alot of us have some smaller machines and connections it would be nice to have it cut down somehow or even make it into a part one and two, just a thought anyways.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file, It would help to load faster, and allow more users to see it faster, if you remove a few things here and there it would help abit, alot of times the things that take up lots of space is Music, Jpegs, and fine detail, just something to look into to have a smaller download time, in the end it will be better for the viewers and voters watching your entry.