XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shakukudance]

hmmm ok

Well not so sure this was much of a story or anything going on besides some animated images and such but I guess this was clock day, it was amusing to the least, so anyways interesting flash you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation, more content, more story would really push this up a tad.

~X~

[Smash Kingdom Lost Levels]

Kind of random

The animation is nice but not awesome, Doesnt mean it cant be awsome its actually decent work and is in a pretty goos shape of quality, B utit still needs some Tweaking there and here and all around for some better outcomes It does have some interesting and entertaining things. all about it though and thats what drew me to this. Haha this was actually pretty cute, and I really like the random including all the different characters from old games and whatnot that made for some good viewing. You really did outdo yourself on this one, the effort does show, and you cant ask for any more then that, So keep up with these unique types, and keep making stuff, as long as theres something to create then keep on making them, You have something good here and as long as you can keep the Momentum going it will be worthwhile to the fullest.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its always good to experiment with ideas here and there even when overused and there is ofcourse always Plenty of room to Include a few helpful ideas that can make a flash like this much better. You have outdone yourself here I dont think you should touch it but if anything is suggested I would suggest some extra larger "VIEW-SCREEN" but other then that its pretty solid.

~X~

[Girlchan in Paradise Ep1]

This was amusing

There are various words I could say about this flash entry, but I think what comes to mind Mostly is that it brings some good enjoyment and has alot of entertainment value, Now I wont say its perfect by any means but I did find it to be a pretty decent and fun movie and i would recremend this to most people who enjoy this kind of stuff. This was interesting and funny at the same time, but it was amusing on the eyes and the ending was notbad at all, a funny flash all around, maybe use some subtitles. You have a decent Showcase here a Definite one to checkout again, you Produce it and the Overall results are a positive one Devoted fans aswell, so nice job all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can do a lot with simple ideas and your film would be better off for it, Infact you can get a lot of impact from the most simple of ideas so try some things out here. subtitles are always nice to have, even if it is not hard to understand its always a nice option to have, now its even better when you cant understand whats being said, then the subtitles come in very handy.

~X~

[PMP Blog 3]

lol

Ok so those voices are just different, gets really high pitched and scratches on the mic, but regardless it was a good design of characters, the convo's between these characters and the audiance was a nice concept, I wouldnt mind seeing some subtitles, but it was a decent flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was amusing Add some subtitles, not sayong its hard to understand but for some it can be, so adding some subtitles would help and just make some subtitles, so that viewers have the option of viewing it with understanding better but its always a nice feature to have. but anyways nice entry.

~X~

[Love- A Story]

This was cute

Potential Potential and even more Potential Thats what I get when I start watching this Movie submission, you can really grasp it and enjoy it for all it is, its entertaining, keeps you amused and not boring what so ever, Some fixes and improvments may come later but I have to say I was pretty taken back with this, especially the start of it. You have some cute-ness to this one and I really like the smooth animation that you have presented here it was all a good story, I wouldnt mind some more "COLOR" mixed in there. What's also amazing is how there are so many good elements in this, yet it isn't a very complicated movie entry, I will say that I am You just never knew what was going to come up next in this. This has some good efforts and done Intensely as it shows, So my Conclusion is that you get my Recognition 100 percent so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
We can come up with some fixes maybe even some smoothing out and come together on this to make a good finished product, Lets load this film up on the maximum possible of ideas. More use of color would be great, more random color uses aswell, other then that this was pretty good.

~X~

[Feliz día de los relojes]

OK

Well ok this is interesting I get it about clock day and all but would have loved to see more "CONTENT" more clock stuff, the flashing was amusing but thought you could have done more in some areas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content ofcourse longer and more use of clocks.

~X~

[Shirt N' Pants]

Interesting piece

Well this was an interesting piece and I like all the elements you gave this was actually kind of funny and really do like the concept of it all. the designs are really good while "SHORT" still pretty impressive, nice job all around.

~X~

[My Willy Won't Go]

Amusing and Entertaining

I certainly Have found that this entry was amusing, entertaining but most of all it kept me wanting to see more, not for the quality but because it was a little something differant then most of the other flash movies that do come thru here, so I do like that you have put the efort to not be the same but change it up abit. This was a pretty cute flash you made it simple yet it was very entertaining, and I was highly amused, and you really have something here I say go with it. You had some Enhanced ideas that built up some Momentum and Overall became the engine of this flash and that made it fun and worthwhile ofcourse. Those are just a few things that kept me interested.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I am Constantly always looking for new stuff and to see what new ideas come thru the portal, And Reflecting on this it was different but was also a Bonus So I have Prepared some fixes, or clean ups maybe even a few Re-Invent options for some ideas here. I think you really have an idea here and i believe you can extend this even more maybe into a "MINI" series of movies and sorts, but this is really a good concept.

~X~

[Power Star 4]

great film

Now Criticisms aside Before I get started on the details and such, I just wanted to say a few things in a more enlightening way of the flash, first off it was a refreshing flash entry and showed off some decent skills here and there and what not.
and here you have a great flick with a match up of mario vs luigi wich was fun and you had some really good "MUSIC" to match up well and the fight scenes were pretty impressive aswell, I like what you have done here. the "EFFECTS" are really good in this one, The Concept really had me here as it did Grasp the audiance aswell, There are only a few spots that could be cleaned up or Ironing out but the Conclusion here is that this was like Visionary idea and project and I had some good enjoyment out of it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So maybe here we can modify a few things just have to be Prepared aswell as Visualize your ideas into new heights and beyond, So I have a few Proposed Changes and its as small as just a few Minor Details. This was really impressive i would say some subtitles but it was good as is.

~X~

D-SuN responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed it. I'd love to have another crack at a fan sprite film - one day indeed!