XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dirty Power part 2]

Nice work

And here was another good sprite film and you really did better with this one then the first the music was a very nice beat and flowed well with the whole piece, I like this for a number of things but you did make something enjoyble here and it was fun to review.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Let the music go on a loop so it dont stop half way thru.

~X~

[Dirty Power part 1]

Hmmm ok

Well I saw the other part 1 and there doesnt seem to be much of a difference at all but for the mostpart this was still pretty good still seems like almost the same flick, you should still remove that next dialog button its just anoying, other then that it was alright.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Remove next button.

~X~

[Bass meets Storm Eagle]

lol

Well not sure what to think about this one it was sort of wacky but that was the entertaining part the sound and music get anoying when it gets loud maybe thats the ideas but for the mostpart it was an amusing little movie you have here it could be better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more plot then randomness.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #8]

lol

Alright lets really get into this review but before I do this was something nice and you bring some solid elements to the table. And another amazing episode, so I am really getting to enjoy this one, just the sound quality needs work it still goes in and out and such, the ideas you bring forward into these are pretty good and amazing and you execute them well and make for a funny story. the idea here with this one was lol funny. This was fun to review so its my pleasure and I hope you keep making stuff like this, You have a nice submission you have presented here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the sound quality needs work it still goes in and out and such, think about cleaning that up.

~X~

[It's time 2/2]

Nice

And the story really unfolds here and the story really gets good here so nice job on this one, you really put in some effort and time in this mainly the story and it really payed off so nice job on that, I look forward to seeing more of these amazing flash films.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing much in this one its pretty solid.

~X~

[It's time]

Nice

Another nice animation and as always great story great characters and really good voices seems like you should link up mouth animation and actaul sound it seemed a tad bit off. but besides that this was a pretty good animation flash here, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should link up mouth animation and actaul sound it seemed a tad bit off.

~X~

[What a crazy bitch! 2/2]

Nice work again

And even for an older flick this is still pretty good, the characters animation voices and action are all top notch, Awards are not always something everyone can get but its nice when you can so awsome job on getting some awards for this flash. But anyways nice animation here really good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Sound could be a bit clearer but for the mostpart it was pretty good.

~X~

[The world against you]

Ok

Well that was amusing, it was actually pretty funny It was a tad bit short and you may want to put a stop action code in there as there was a loop going here, but besides that it was actually ok, just make it longer next time. but for sure stop that loop lol.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and fix that loop, this is an easy process with some simple action script code, its called a STOP-ACTION-CODE now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell, There a bunch of tutorial flashes on newgrounds that will easily show you how to do this, in the end it will only help your flash to run better and smoother. A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short I would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece. just try some things and make it longer.

~X~

[Valentine for SwearBear]

Funny

Lol well I will admit this one gave me some laughs and a few chuckles you really made something good here and while it was kind of 3d it was still good kinda sad how it ended but still a funny yet sad little story you have here, sound was notbad but could be better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Sound quality could be better.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #7]

Nice

I like that you change up the "INTRO" seems like these earlier episodes had more great "IDEAS" like going out of the studio and doing stunts and other things, so you should really push ideas like this they make it very fun and entertaining. the sister is funny lol. This was a decent flash, now ofcourse there were some things that could be better and fixed and such, stated a few of them above and some more tips added below, these tips should help to make it somewhat better if not maybe they will give you some ideas, but even if you didnt use any of these tips you have a decent idea here with this flash, I look forward to seeing much more of your work in the near future. Untill then keep up the fancy work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More ideas outside the studio, more guests, more stunts, more jokes etc.

~X~