XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Infultration]

Nice

These animations are nice and you give a good little story here and makes for some fun action, you can see you put in the effort in this one, the sound/fx are really good, the graphics are not half bad either. anyways fun little movie you have here, keep up the decent animations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spice up the art work abit better maybe ad some voices in there aswell.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #3]

Here we go

Well here we go with another episode, I have noticed you have won a few awrds for this series notbad and congrats for sure, but for me there is a volume voice quality where the voice goes in and out sometimes thats something you could clean up just a tad or something. but besides that this was pretty funny and amusing if you ask me. Great flash here, I really like what you did here and the Effort does show, there was a few things that could be made better and some extra effort on your part would, theres.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some clean up on the voice recording maybe a new mic or ptogram might help.

~X~

[stt: using the potty]

Strange and odd

Well this one was kind of odd but I had fun watching it, it was pretty entertaining with the sticks and simple music, you could probably ad some color to this maybe even in the backround, but other then that this was actually pretty amusing stuff, keep making stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some color or stick figure in color would be one idea.

~X~

[vespa patrol part 1]

Amusing

Well this one was kind of random, the voices are notbad, the characters on the intro were kinda funny and this whole piece was actually pretty amusing, they dont make stuff like this anymore and thats sad it was pretty funny stuff though, wish you could make more funny stuff for us.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More random stuff ofcourse.

~X~

[BlahClock's Day]

Ad subtitles

Well for sure on this one ad some subtitles the voices can be hard to understand at times, but its always fun seeing a few old clock movies, this one did kind of just end erumptly but was still pretty amusing you should have the "MUSIC" on a loop, it tends to just cut out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the music on a continuos loop.

~X~

[Pmation: "Cowboy Meets World"]

Awsome

and once again you show off some nice skills I really like the animation and bright use of color on these you really bring out some cute and fun animations and these are not short by any means you really show some nice work and funny stuff. And with this flash it was actually pretty good, I liked the effort you put forward on this but there are still a few more things here and there that could make it even better, ihave posted a few ideas i hope they help to improve on this so good luck, and I hope to see improvments soon, or in the near future. But untill then this was a decent piece of flashworks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really cant think of a single thing that this project needs to be improved because you have covered all your basis and made a fun submission with no changes needed.

~X~

[Boulbous Bouffant]

Amusing

lol I have to admit this was pretty funny the voices were cool a bit different from the clocks normal voices, the screen size seemed a bit small but really this was a pretty entertaining of a film, nice to see different characters and not so short eithere.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some subtitles but not really needed.

~X~

[Fuck off]

first of all congrats on getting frontpaged I think some subtitles would be awsome in this case but the movie itself was kinda funny, nice characters good script the film itself did seem somewhat short, maybe adding to it or other epsiodes would be one idea. but nice work regardless.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the film itself did seem somewhat short, maybe adding to it or other epsiodes would be one idea.

~X~

[The Search II]

Just like a movie

Well this starts out just like a movie, the whole thing was like a movie and you can see the energy and time that has been put into this and for that along I am impressed, I love stuff like this must be a good script you went with and the music was a plus.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Onlything I would suggest would speen up points between scenes and such.

~X~

[Pmation: "Snow Man's Land"]

Cool

Haha another one of these silly animations with some interesting little tidbits of funky happenings very nice indeed, great characters and nice animation, sound was great aswell, I like the blank white backround aswell, makes for a pretty good animation on here indeed. You have an idea here and something decent here, I had fun with this one but it could use some more effort as suggested below and above and hope those ideas help to make it even better for all, but even as it is it was pretty decent if you ask me, keep up the decent efforts though. And hope to see more of your flash-works sometime soon. Anyways untill next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So these are not short by any means but I could see you putting a few of these together in one flash entry making for one huge flash submission, just an idea though.

~X~