XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[School Scare]

Interesring

So this was notbad it was an interesting little short you have here I wished this had been longer and maybe more executed on the humor but for the most part you did pretty good with this animation and hope to see more like this from you it was entertaining for the most anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer

~X~

artistunknown responds:

Yeah, it's been a good while since I've done anything long enough to have substance (minus my ground hog day cartoon). I've got something with actual substance coming up REAL soon.

Also it's good to know that the only thing that needs improving on something FMTS-related is the length, makes me even more tempted to go back to the full episodes.

Thanks!

[GET OUT OF MY CAR]

entertaining

Wow this was pretty nifty of a movie kind of reminds me of an "UBER" experience, Perhaps a more Refine of style and a few Ironing out of things but thats for later, I was Excitedly awaiting to review this, infact it was Enticing with some Advanced Entertainment about it with a Grand start.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some subtitles on this one

~X~

[The Tweet Before Christmas]

Very nice

So this was cool I love how it starts off with the "HOUSE" and snow and ice, the voice is actually pretty good. It really is pleasing to know that with all the flash movies out there that there is still something new here and there in the portal, so keep up that vibe of things. This was a good Discovery It was a Victory if you ask me and it Suited the element perfectly

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
these narratting types are great you should make more like this type.

~X~

[Dovahbear 4]

Love the visuals

The color and visuals on this is pretty good, you even had some shadows and such that really made this look real, There was some nice entertaining moments, There could be some Tweaking here and there, Perhaps Later in this review I will suggest some ways to tweak and improve on those areas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more like this.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #96]

Awsome

And once again another amusing and funny episode you have here, so nice job there love the cast here especially all that sergio does, would be nice to have an episode where sergio goes missing lol, anyways nice work here on this episode. Its hard to get this started off with the right words, so ill just go ahead and say that I have had some fun with this entry, you pushed the efforts, and showed us some interesting things, now ofcourse there were a few issues were things could be better, but overall I thought you did a good job on this one and showed some effort thruout the entry. It was a pleasent flash, and had some obvious points of improvment, wich i will explain later, but other then that this was not half bad at all, keep up the fantastic work. anyways untill next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes this time but subtitles would still be a great idea for this series.

~X~

[The Good, The Bad, The Mulaney]

Good humor

so I like alot of things about this one like the cut out style art, and the "VOICES" were notbad either, Now this is the type of flash that someone could fall head over heels with, not saying I have but this was something different and I like the style this flash has been heading in, there was some interesting creativity through out this flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love to see more of an ongoing series from all this.

~X~

[Slurp My Flurp]

Cool

So this was kind of cool, it was rather short but it was more about the "JOKE" and along with the music at the right time you executed it just right, Imagination is everything So make this Golden, I am sure you are able to create some very good movies With some various cool visuals and depth to them, so these are just some thoughts on making this better but overall I liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest a few more short ones but bundle them up all together in one big one.

~X~

[Infinite Legends]

Nice animation

The "VOICES" are really good in this one so props to you on that element, you have a good story here too, Random ideas is a Wonderfully and Absolutely good way to get the ideas as much exposure And there is lots of Potential in this and thats why I like it, So as I do start on this review I will suggest some stuff, but overall its decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more like this they are entertaining.

~X~

[Patron Poker Night! (Loop)]

Cute

Well this was a cute little animation you have here I love the "OLD" feel of this and how its like a black and white film but in color, the "MUSIC" played a really good role into this with all the element going on, so nice old style film here I enjoyed it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest just make more of these.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #97]

This one Sparkled with joy

Cant go wrong with some "ANIMATED-SHORTD" lol And once again this one has sparkled with the joy of sergios humor and style in every episode its always something new and different and I like how the artwork does get better over time and you have a lot of these episodes so thats always a plus of things very nice work indeed, This is one of the most Entertaining flash entries I have come across in awhile. It mostly works so well because you are just inspired so much to keep it going and going. and its an interesting movie style aswell, There's tons of nifty things going on in this one. and thats what makes it nifty. This was pretty Advanced if you ask me. There was some enjoyment from this, It, was actually Refreshing, but anyways good luck on your future endeavors, I will keep an eye out for more of your stuff because its a brilliant style you bring us.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
subtitles on these early versions would be cool.

~X~