XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[WTFuture]

Awsome film

So this was pretty cool, the film is as always great "EDDS-WORLD" is by far one of the better film artists out there "RIP" but regardless there is no need for any changes as the artists is no longer with us but it was an entertaining film indeed, Will have to checkout whatelse you have had in store for us in your profile.

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there is no need for any changes as the artists is no longer with us but it was an entertaining film indeed

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[LUCKY DAY FOREVER]

Very intense

so this was very "INTENSE" the film itself just starts off and right into the action, the style of art and animation in this is really nice, love all the different view shots and some really artistic stylish art you have in here, I did think the tempo of the film could run much better but overall this was a good movie submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I did think the tempo of the film could run much better

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[Hiro the Dense]

I like it

So this was cool, I really like this the "STORY" alone is pretty interesting my suggestion for small improvments would be first the Candle flame could have more of a realistic movement and also adding some subtitles, but other then that this was a great story and hope you make more like this.

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my suggestion for small improvments would be first the Candle flame could have more of a realistic movement and also adding some subtitles

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ZedrinBot responds:

I don't want to bake subtitles into the video itself, that's something I do on Youtube using their captions service, as it allows me to easily produce / outsource translations for other languages.

[Rise of the MK: Part 2]

Awsome as always

Well you always seem to make some of the "BEST" sprite movies and you really make these jump the different "SCENES" are amazing and the effects are even better you really do bring on a brilliant story and make these films come so "ALIVE" no changes needed here as this film is already at its best potential, so props to you on a beautiful film.

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no changes needed here as this film is already at its best potential

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[Delirium]

Oh wow

Dang I have to say this is really artistic and entertaining of an animation and will be one of my faves after this review you have a new instant fan with this all the different elements are so artistic and different, I think you should have had some different music to really flow with it, but besides that this was some amazing work.

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I think you should have had some different music to really flow with it

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ILLLOGIC responds:

Thanks! Animation is definitely not a strong suit of mine but IT SOOO FUN. Glad to hear the parts you like and don't like. It helps me get a perspective so I can improve.

[Paul wears Prada]

Cute little animation here

The art quality was notbad and the bears are cute and make for a delightful serries here you should for sure make more of these with more bars and such, but anyways a good little toon you have here I was really enjoying this, it has some good humor, so keep that up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of these silly bear toons.

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theBEARtrap responds:

Thank you for your kind review. We are definitely in the works with more bears! Bear with us and we will do our best to push em out! Cheerios!

[EFN Episode 3: Purpose]

Love the story

So this was pretty good I really love the "STORY" here on this one it also has some really nice "EFFECTS" and view points, you really know how to bring the story alive in this one, there is no major changes that is needed in this one as you have presented a very good story and animation to go along with it, so nice job indeed.

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there is no major changes that is needed in this one as you have presented a very good story and animation to go along with it

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[Wool E]

Cute

So this was a "CUTE" idea I like this little robot he actually made the animation more exciting and entertaining, but then it just ended, That was very short and guess thats cool for some people more depth of the story like one idea might be have the robot chase the character all around town maybe misshaps here and there just an idea but making it a tad longer wouldnt hurt would make it more exciting to see more scenes and action ofcourse.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested above

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[School 13 - I H8 X-MAS]

Nice film

So this was pretty good of a "FILM" I like the idea of the subtitles but they flow too fast maybe you could slow down each scene and whatnot that could be a small improvment on things, but overall this was a good submission with funny moments and good characters so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the idea of the subtitles but they flow too fast maybe you could slow down each scene and whatnot that could be a small improvment on things

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