XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Happy Moms Day!]

Cute and short

Well this was a cute and short animation you have here, the idea is really "FUNNY" and you have some ideas that could even make this better like you can make it longer for sure and the idea you do have here has so much potential. anyways really nice work here loved it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the short you have here but the thing about this was that it was just too short and you really could make this whole film alot better with either more short flicks three or four differant short ones, or just add more stuff to this short one, like more content more visuals longer and more indepth, and atleast thats a start in making it better and much more improved.

~X~

YULFO83 responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I created this the day of mothers day so i didn't have much time to make it longer, also not sure where else i can go with it. maybe other animals on mothers day? I hope to make longer content soon. I just need more time to work on stuff. thanks again!

[CHASE.fla]

Madness

Well your madness creations are the best and have started a whole new style for animations of the past and future, love the deep textures and detailed madness characters this one didnt last too long but has a nice visual on it, I would suggest adding more to this maybe a few more scenes and whatnot, So when reviewing I like to see if an artist takes the easy or puts effort through-out, and it seems you did put the effort and have shown a good direction with some nice quality about it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest adding more to this maybe a few more scenes and whatnot

~X~

[Pokemon Spread]

lol

Well that was interesting and a whole different take on the "POKEMON" world this one was rather short but was kind of interesting really good characters and voices but this was kind of short maybe theres a way you can extend on the scenes and joke ofcourse, Now with this one you have started out on all the right fronts here, but as I always say if you are going to make something good make it count, And I must say you have done that here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this was kind of short maybe theres a way you can extend on the scenes and joke ofcourse

~X~

[Quick Stix EP1]

A cute animation

So this was a cute animation you have here, The sticks are notbad even the "TANK" was notbad it was very entertaining actually was a tad bit short and could see you adding much more to this one, maybe some added effects in the backround more story more depth among other things it was a funny short though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe some added effects in the backround more story more depth among other things

~X~

[Dragon Soul]

This was cute

So this was kind of cute this little animation here was notbad and seems like there is a story here just has to have some dialog going even some subtitles would work well with this one but besides that this was a decent animation you have here you should continue with this though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
just has to have some dialog going even some subtitles would work well with this

~X~

[Lovestreams]

Good film

Wow this was a cool film I really like the animation was really solid the idea and concept is brilliant and probably related to a lot of people and congrats on all the awards you made a nice film and got rewarded for it so congrats to you on such an achievement anyways very good work nice visuals and overall a good concept I hope you keep up the good work

~X~

[300 the movie the clock]

Haha nice

Wow I have to say this was really nice you really pushed for some nice elements on this one and I have to say it was really funny throughout but mostly at the end that was one fantastic ending of the animation clocks and 300 can't go wrong with that and you really made it entertaining so I was happy with everything anyways keep up the good work I look forward to even more from you

~X~

[The Life of Something]

This one was strange

I have to say this was a strange one it had some strange moments and it not being a clock film but then again does it was just all strange and odd but it's related to clocks in someway or another I actually like the subtle approach of the animation and such I like your idea and concept here this was a decent film you have here very good indeed I love the work you do here anyways nice job

~X~

[WHEN TURTLES SNAP]

Nice

This was a cartoon but you really made it seem like a real movie just needs some opening credits at the start and ending, the tutles were pretty funny and seemed to get mad easy lol, So you have presented something nice here and I can see there is a tad more room for changes, this sort of reminded me of a big event at the box office or something, anyways good start here, and I really do look forward to more I could even see you make a good series out of the snapping turtles, anyways nice film.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you really made it seem like a real movie just needs some opening credits at the start and ending, I could even see you make a good series out of the snapping turtles

~X~

[Pmation: "Forbidden Flute"]

Nice animation

Another cute one you have here, he woke up from a "SLEEP" and was kind of mean or grumpy lol, Anyways I think you should ad some colored paper as a backround of some sort, And once again you have some nice animation here smooth and flows so well it was a brilliant little animation you have here and seems to have a good folowing so nice work on this indeed, and I for sure want to see more, Would love a bit more action though but still nice work here. OK so while this review is almost comming to an end I found this flash submission to be fun somewhat entertaining, it had some good visuals and showed some of your effort put into this, so keep at it as this was notbad at all. Keep making great lil animations like you have done here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should ad some colored paper as a backround of some sort

~X~