Nice work here
Very nice "VIEW-SHOTS" nice "STORY" too some really nice elements to this that really made it like a fun little movie, Now as a small improvment here I could see you adding some subtitles just for some extra measure of the story itself, Perhaps with more eye for detail and putting that detail into effect more it will certainly feel and look better, but its just a start on making lots of new endeavors in the movie world ofcourse.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now as a small improvment here I could see you adding some subtitles just for some extra measure of the story itself
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