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[Sperm Wars]

Nice Film

So this was notbad of a film the "ANIMATION" was really smooth while this was a very short flick I still found this one to be pretty funny and I enjoyed the little "STORY" of war that took place here on this one, I think this could be longer somehow but overall this was an entertaining animation.

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I think this could be longer somehow

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[The Broken Boy]

Ok

So that was a strange one but it was some good animation that you presented here, the formation from human to demon and back was nice but not sure what the point was, I would love some story some action secenes an adventure that takes us on some fun adventure here, anyways nice animation here.

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I would love some story some action secenes an adventure that takes us on some fun adventure here

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[A Programmers Hell]

Short lived

Well that was short lived and I "BELIEVE" this has happened to me before it was a nice toon you have here it was really nifty actually, but too short so you should think of ways to extend on this a few extra scenes then the intermission part lol, anyways nice attempt here.

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too short so you should think of ways to extend on this a few extra scenes then the intermission part

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[Pmation: "Love Is Blind"]

A beautiful submission

Very "CUTE" love can always be cute it was a sad ending though lol "POOR-GUY" he should have tried harder, And we have lift off, another awsome and beautifull entry here, you seem to make somany of these they are fantastic to see, and I think the best things about all these are the flow of animation and how smooth you make it flow, the content and random stories also are pretty good too, An entertaining flash with lots of enjoyment and lots to see and the visuals were great a very pleasent and fantastic flash. keep at it I like your work and cant wait to see moreof your endeavors in flash movies and games. My Closing Remarks would be keep at it, keep up the decent works and I hope to see more of your work sometime soon.

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I could see this going longer where the guy fights for her love even more.

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[yoda's halloween]

Short

so that was really "SHORT" you have a decent "IDEA" here and I think you could have done a tad bit more with this like take yoda to different houses and getting candy or something, it might be even more funny it was a good toon though and think you should make more like this one.

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you could have done a tad bit more with this like take yoda to different houses and getting candy or something

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[Beavis and Butthead-NC]

Notbad

So this was actually notbad and it was like watching this fun show once again, I think you could have done more with this like made it longer have them go on an adventure and some subtitles would have been nice, but besides all that this fun classic of a film was pretty good indeed.

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I think you could have done more with this like made it longer have them go on an adventure and some subtitles would have been nice

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[H3H3 Animated - 'The Proposal']

Cute animation here

So this was kind of "RANDOM" story wise I really like the artistic style of the artwork though this was really short and I think you could make it longer and more depth into the story, but honestly it was a nice delight of a film and hope you make more stuff like this soon.

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this was really short and I think you could make it longer and more depth into the story

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[The Killer Clown]

Very nice

So first off the "ART" is pretty amazing the "ANIMATION" is so smooth its uncanny, the plot or story here is one that takes place from the rocky movies lol a good moment and guess this could be the truth lol, it was so short though I would have loved to see more to the story or plot and the looping could be fixed, anyways nice short here.

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I would have loved to see more to the story or plot and the looping could be fixed

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drainzerhg responds:

thanks, i know it makes little to no sense, but that´s because i put all the effort on the visuals and the sound, and let a side a coherent plot.

[That's how we impose fine]

Entertaining and Interesting

So this was entertaining and as mentioned interesting, its an old classic but is still a fun watch the "ART" is simple and could be spruced up with some improved character form and some shading within the character even, the music was cool the button to the next scene was probably not needed, but anyways nice film.

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The art is simple and could be spruced up with some improved character form and some shading within the character even

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[RABBIT SEASON]

Ohmy

Wow That was an interesting piece I do like the "FRAME-BY-FRAME" style on this and the artistic backround and use of color even the "STORY" was kind of cute you had some nice twist in the story and made it really interesting seems like you could have made it go a tad bit longer but for waht it is its a good submission.

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seems like you could have made it go a tad bit longe

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