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[The Train Question]

Nice toon

So this was a nice toon here, it was rather short and had some nice "VISUAL-POINTS" like the crossing of the trains then when it hit the "SUBSCRIBE" scene I was let down, it was starting to feel like something good with some nice animation, so my advice is ad some subtitles, and make more of a story from it, nice work here.

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so my advice is ad some subtitles, and make more of a story from it

~X~

[First Contact]

Really nice animation

So this was some really nice animation you have presented here, the flow of the "ANIMATION" was very smooth and the art stylish backrounds was great the visuals were pretty good on this a nice little story you have here, anyways keep up the amazing work here.

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You could make a series out of this there is alot of potential to it.

~X~

[Pillow Talk]

Nice art

So this was some nice "ART" and the animation was not too bad either, love the artistic "COLORS" you put in the backrounds this was a very short animation and I felt like it wasnt finished story wise so maybe this could be but its a nice entry, so keep up the fantastic work.

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I felt like it wasnt finished story wise so maybe this could be but its a nice entry

~X~

[The Regular Show Collab]

Entertaining

So Im not sure who these guys are, but they are pretty funny and amusing and the characters are really welldone, good animation and some nice executed jokes even, so this was pretty good work and a nice and funny film you have here, hope to see more from you guys sometime soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more of these.

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[The Elder Scrotum (An Elder Scrolls Parody)]

lol amusing

So this one was pretty amusing, love what you have done here with the "CHARACTERS" and the character designs very nice work there, as for the film it made for a funny and amusing film, some extra added nifty and flashy effects would be a great addition on this one, and maybe make it a tad bit longer, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some extra added nifty and flashy effects would be a great addition on this one, and maybe make it a tad bit longer

~X~

[12 Days of Overwatch Christmas! - Parody Music Video]

Nice song

so this one starts off pretty well, its kind of like a "MUSIC-VIDEO" with some really nice art detail and creations and the animation on this was pretty smooth so nice job indeed, I do wish there was a faster tempo on the song though but even with that this was amusing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do wish there was a faster tempo on the song though

~X~

[Forever in a Fantasy]

Wow nice

Wow this was cool, the water looked so real and the visuals was amazing the "MUSIC" was pretty impressive even, you really made this look pretty cool, I like it alot but seems like you can do more with it maybe a sail boat or even shark or whale or something in the water. Anyways nice work.

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seems like you can do more with it maybe a sail boat or even shark or whale or something in the water

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[Mech]

Artistic

So I found this "ANIMATION" to be somewhat "ARTISTIC" the loop wich was a short loop does loop maybe theres a way you could make it longer because you do have some potential here some extra added frames would be a plus, but with all that said this was nice of an animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the loop wich was a short loop does loop maybe theres a way you could make it longer because you do have some potential here some extra added frames would be a plus

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MrKai responds:

Thanks for the input, I really appreciate it!

[Noet Finished MLG Klown Pilot!! :(]

Cute animation

A cute animation here it was "CUTE" because you had some "RANDOM" stuff and the black and white scenes were actually notbad, I did think this was kind of short so maybe making it somewhat longer would be a key, but with all that said this was actually a cute little toon.

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I did think this was kind of short so maybe making it somewhat longer would be a key

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[Penguin animation]

This was a cute film

Wow This was really cute the little "CGARACTER" running around and sliding was cute I think if you added some backround scene and stuff in the backround it would make this film much better, aswell as some added color too, other then that this was a cute piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think if you added some backround scene and stuff in the backround it would make this film much better, aswell as some added color too

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