Notbad at all
A decent opening scene you have here, a good start to a decent submission, I do think you could make this a tad bit longer and maybe ad some subtitles, allthough it could have some improved elements but for waht it is you have impressed this viewer, so keep up the decent work, and ill be an instant fan, and you can really make this into some Cutting Edge stuff, You gave it an Extraordinary feel and touch, so nice effort all around.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could make this a tad bit longer and maybe ad some subtitles
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