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Well that was "FUNNY" I think it was just too short maybe you can make it longer and ad some subtitles even, You have captured a good vibe with this one, And I suggest you keep going with that kind of vibe, You have maximized and created a good foundation, nice efforts here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it was just too short maybe you can make it longer and ad some subtitles even
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