XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spelunkin' With Duncan]

This was cool

so this was a nice animation the characters are amusing I do wish there was some sort of subtitles on this I like the scratchy screen like its from a tv or something, but its a nice element of animation the artistic atyle of art is nice and some great voices here a fun and entertaining movie here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I do wish there was some sort of subtitles on this

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CharlieEmerson responds:

Thanks for the review!

[MiSSi0N Speed]

Very nice stick here

Stick adventureI love the comic style in this the black and white theme here is pretty nice, maybe some even more color added just for more effect on this style, Some nice adventure here and with some sticks is pretty good you have some nice film ideas here and bringing sticks into it is a nice job here, and some good stick adventure you have shown here some really nice action and fun elements here so a good stick movie here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe some even more color added just for more effect on this style

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[Dinosaur Boy Episode 2]

Very nice

So I was glad to find this entry here another in the series and must say while there is not a lot of animation the art and how you present it is really amazing so really awsome job here the view shots and art together really play well especially with how the story comes along still would have loved some subtitles it could ad some stylish element to the series as a whole, anyways nice work here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
None other then some small added stuff as mentioned.

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TheWhaleAnimation responds:

Thank you! Really curious what you think of the rest of the series, the whole show is on NG :)

[-The Pan-]

Fun stick adventure

This was notbad seemed like you could have made this longer maybe some new scenes even it was alright though, nice action and fun, This was a pretty fun adventure and great film with some nice stick adventure, there are tons of stick adventures out there but this one had a nice little twist of a story on it aswell as some good adventure with the sticks so nice job

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
seemed like you could have made this longer maybe some new scenes even it was alright though

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[Teach Me How to Doki]

Wow that was fast

So that was rather fast I mean it was over before I could blink my eyes but from what I did see there was some nice animation some decent music in there just needs to be longer maybe even some different backround scenes too but it was entertaining

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
just needs to be longer maybe even some different backround scenes too

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[StickDude Killing Arena 4]

A fun stick movie

Nice stick battle here on this one the sound F/X was good too wouldnt mind some added flashy effects added in here, Some nifty scenes in this one with a little twist or two, I have seen many sticks and there movies this was an intersting adventure here, "STICKS-ARE-A-DIME-A-DOZEN" but you bring something new to the table, and you bring "A-PRETTY-GOOD-MOVIE" to the portal here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wouldnt mind some added flashy effects added in here

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[Dinosaur Boy Episode 1]

This was nice

The story was really good here the visuals very nice not a lot of animation and as this is the portal , it was an entertaining piece the artwork was nice, wish there was more animation like on the mouths as they talk and such, but besides that this was pretty good work here some very deep storylines and nice art detail.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Other then more animation it was pretty solid stuff.

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TheWhaleAnimation responds:

Thank you!
I saw you watched the fifth episode in early February, reckon the series gets better as the episodes go on :)

[alien lego attack 2]

Time for some Lego

This was cool seems like a more close up camera angle would have been better and maybe more faster tempo music of some sort and I would even go with a larger view screen, The legos are a great idea and you have presented some nice visual points here on this one, I love how you have some small action in this and theres "EVEN-A-SMALL-STORY" there, so its always exciting to see "LEGO-ANIMATIONS" such as you have presented here with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a more close up camera angle would have been better and maybe more faster tempo music of some sort and I would even go with a larger view screen

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[Valor’s World 5]

This was cute

So this was both cute and random and had some nice element about it, you have some ok animation but could be smoother a bit more direction on the story and some subtitles would go well here, but regardless of all that said this was rather cute and entertaining

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you have some ok animation but could be smoother a bit more direction on the story and some subtitles would go well here

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stevetherapper responds:

I can’t use subtitles because I use phone, sorry. And this was a couple of months ago. And it will be super duper hard to use subtitles on your phone.

[Clay Meets Lego]

Lego is awsome

Haha that was cute and really short I would suggest making it longer with some added flashy effects and such, The lego movie you presented is pretty nifty and while there seems to be a big loading time it was well worth it, the action and and how the stop "ACTION-TAKES-PLACE" is all a fun element to these kinds of movies and I enjoyed the "LEGO-SCENES" and whatnot so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest making it longer with some added flashy effects and such

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