Nice work
This was a great flash movie the black and white element was different and nice some added subtitles would work well with this one, I could see this going alot more further with lots more stuff and visuals added, So just a few things to think about, but anyways good start So-Far, You have something good here Allthough it does need abit more, But for the most part you have some decent work here and I wouldnt mind seeing how far you can take it, You can give this a cutting edge touch Or a ritzy feel, Just needs to be turbo charged but it will be better for any effort and for the most part you have created just that here.
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some added subtitles would work well with this one
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