Intense
So this was intense the voice work alone got me really impressive stuff and I have really enjoyed this kind of like a realy movie going on, anyways no major changes needed here, And with all that said I do want to mention that this has been a pleasure, this is something that I would suggest to friends to see some portions I was not too fond of, But you had substantial positive stuff aswell, so nice efforts I like what you are doing here.
~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
As suggested no major changes needed
~X~